Yoan

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Apr 23, 2015 7:36 AM #1352184
Yoan
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bandana is optional
Abilities:
Yoans ability is super speed. His speed is little above the speed of sound. He can also make his hands big as much as he wants, the bigger they get the thicker the skin is so he can use them as a shield.
Weaknesses:
He hits fast but not hard enough. He is weak against metal opponents. If he makes his hands too big they will slow him down due to the weight gain.
About:
Working as a scientist for the army, he was making a formula for "super soldiers". One day the experiment messed up and he touched the sample before it was ready. For a surprise the chemical worked as expected but with the side effect of making his mind unstable. He then, realizing what power he had. Yoan started using it for his own pleasure... robbery, vandalism etc. He then got bored and realized it wasn't worth it. Yoan wanted a challenge, thus he became a rock hard gladiator.
Demo:
[swf=http://www.filz.us/files/2fb0629a/5fc/Demo3.swf]width=900 height=450[/swf]

Before changes-Demo 1 - Alternative link
Before changes-Demo 2 - Alternative link
Battles:
1.Yoan vs Dax - RHG Dax (lost)
2.Yoan vs Splice - RHG Splice (Speedbattle) (won)
3.Yoan vs Scatter - RHG Scatter (won)
Points:
2/1
Availability:
Lazy AF
Hitlist:
Splice the potato-man
Pitch
Androkos
Change log:
1.Made the gladiator
+super speed
2.Added new abilities and looks:
+enlarge hands
+green bandana
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Apr 23, 2015 9:38 PM #1352422
The rhg is stuffed with clichés such as super speed and science experiment gone wrong but it doesn't make it bad.
Gl with future battles!
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Apr 23, 2015 10:05 PM #1352432
I like speed-based RHG's cause it makes me observe how fast the animator can actually animate their speedy RHG :>

nice RHG, good luck on your future battles!
battle me one day!
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Apr 23, 2015 10:23 PM #1352438
Quote from generalZ
The rhg is stuffed with clichés such as super speed and science experiment gone wrong but it doesn't make it bad.
Gl with future battles!


Yes I know but I'm not aiming for originality, plus I like super speed. I may add more to him but for now he is just a normal fast runner :)

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I like speed-based RHG's cause it makes me observe how fast the animator can actually animate their speedy RHG :>

nice RHG, good luck on your future battles!
battle me one day!


Thanks a lot!
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Apr 24, 2015 1:15 AM #1352526
Well in my opinion, you could have more details about your RHG to be more interesting to read. But it seems fine. As for the demo, it's pretty much a decent animation. Though the body structure is pretty much poor. Go practice making stickfigures to make them look neat-looking. And also the movements seem to be quite too fast for my eyes. A little more frames on those movements, alright? The trails seem to be alright, but improve their structures. The effect when your RHG slow mowed, well I gotta say, it was pretty good.

Good luck with your battles, JohnyBravo!
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Apr 24, 2015 4:01 AM #1352609
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Yes I know but I'm not aiming for originality, plus I like super speed. I may add more to him but for now he is just a normal fast runner :)



Thanks a lot!


Reminds me of quickfeet in a way... Damn jombo we love u <3
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Apr 24, 2015 6:45 AM #1352634
Quote from Castro
Well in my opinion, you could have more details about your RHG to be more interesting to read. But it seems fine. As for the demo, it's pretty much a decent animation. Though the body structure is pretty much poor. Go practice making stickfigures to make them look neat-looking. And also the movements seem to be quite too fast for my eyes. A little more frames on those movements, alright? The trails seem to be alright, but improve their structures. The effect when your RHG slow mowed, well I gotta say, it was pretty good.

Good luck with your battles, JohnyBravo!


Thank you. As I already said more abilities will be added later on... as for the stick construction, I agree but it's kinda hard to draw without a tablet.
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Apr 24, 2015 1:58 PM #1352723
LIKE THE DEMO :C
gl with this stuff
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Apr 24, 2015 4:06 PM #1352751
Quote from Atsukedaime
LIKE THE DEMO :C
gl with this stuff


THANKS :C
Why so sad? :C
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Apr 24, 2015 7:22 PM #1352809
BTW the only body proportions that i find weird in this demo is the second one. with the empty head..... ya i find the rest ok.
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Apr 24, 2015 7:36 PM #1352811
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Thank you. As I already said more abilities will be added later on... as for the stick construction, I agree but it's kinda hard to draw without a tablet.


Well you could try practicing instead of waiting to gain your tablet again. It's better to be independent with your PC rather than depending on your gadgets. So that when you become independent with your PC, you won't be needing other gadgets. Or, you could use the line tool instead if you ever want to.

And I'm also looking forward to see more abilities and weaknesses. Again, good luck with your RJG for further battles! ^_^
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Apr 24, 2015 7:36 PM #1352812
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BTW the only body proportions that i find weird in this demo is the second one. with the empty head..... ya i find the rest ok.


That's kinda the style. You know like the BIG HEADS small body kinda type. But this one is kinda "noob-ish" style. And I kinda like it you can make quite awesome and smooth looking animations. Sometimes abnormal bodies can be good.
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Apr 24, 2015 8:10 PM #1352820
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That's kinda the style. You know like the BIG HEADS small body kinda type. But this one is kinda "noob-ish" style. And I kinda like it you can make quite awesome and smooth looking animations. Sometimes abnormal bodies can be good.


i mean body proportion. i dont mind the heads but the torso almost looks longer then the legs
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Apr 24, 2015 9:07 PM #1352836
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i mean body proportion. i dont mind the heads but the torso almost looks longer then the legs


Damn ... it just looks strange to draw long legs, atleast for me. But I will practice.

Quote from Castro
Well you could try practicing instead of waiting to gain your tablet again. It's better to be independent with your PC rather than depending on your gadgets. So that when you become independent with your PC, you won't be needing other gadgets. Or, you could use the line tool instead if you ever want to.

And I'm also looking forward to see more abilities and weaknesses. Again, good luck with your RJG for further battles! ^_^


Ha! Who said I'm not training... I am. It is just that I am kinda happy with the animations I've done and I don't really want to change too much stuff.
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Apr 24, 2015 10:39 PM #1352849
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Ha! Who said I'm not training... I am. It is just that I am kinda happy with the animations I've done and I don't really want to change too much stuff.


If you insist. I'm not forcing you around to do this and that anyway. The demo was decent, so if you don't want to change your style, then I won't disturb. :D