So yea, i'm making a temporarly animation thread, were I will post shorts tests, combo's, fight's all sorts off things to get better and better. I want the pro's or just you guys to C&C them, and to keep this thread alive lol.

I Also take requests, if there interesting =P



New:

- [1 August] 1vs1 Short: http://antiup.net/view/13103/


Old:

- [30 july] Staff combo: http://antiup.net/view/12366/

Wow, the pole is as thick as he is, but he can still move it like a pro.
Only thing that seemd wrong was the pole thickness.

Make a staff combo, but actually hitting someone =3

the thickness is fine if any thinner it would look to thin and dude, u really need to make a combo tut cuz ur like amazing at combos. i no im not a pro so i cant say much but in my opinion ur a beast. also maybe make the staff combo longer

Fine rofl.

Although steelcold already made one. (check sfdt.com) you guys keep asking every thread I make :P so I guess i will make a combo. then add a fbf thing and add text every frame that explains

thnx for helping a newb like me :) lol

Quote from smallaballa

the thickness is fine if any thinner it would look to thin

No, it wouldn't.
It just needs to be thinner then the blue dude.

Your sticks are stiff. Like really stiff. Bend their backs and limbs more.

Quote from Cicada

Your sticks are stiff. Like really stiff. Bend their backs and limbs more.

Very stiff? D: to me it doesnt look THAT Stiff, I mean I know its kinda stiff. But I don't see it that bad in my own animations.

Thanks. Although I bend the back all the time ;-; Guess I gotto bend it more.

The staff is reeeeeaaaaaly choppy.

It's not really that stiff.

Explain what choppy is exactly? cause he moves his hands and spins, that's why the staff spins. I thought I made the staff good :P

Choppy and stiff ok =| the usual lol.

More? but its decent/good right? >_> appart from that?

Use bend lines as trials, all i can suggest

Yea rofl the trail was messed up.

Any requests? to do a (SHORT) thing. Like a combo or w/e >_>

It wasn't that stiff dood. I can see how it wouldn't look realistic, but in my opinion it makes the dude look like hes just a pro with a staff.

The thing that got me was that neck at the start, and the head felt a bit too big. Oh, and that trail was a bit dodgy.