Do NOT jump down the cliff..
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lol nice but still can be improved ;)

Thanks,but I said this isn't about animation.

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Thanks,but I said this isn't about animation.

Then why did you submit it?

because there is written:this animation is about idea not about animation,
people on portal say they like it,but it was done in about 1-2 hours(its really quick),so the animation isnt so good,but the idea is for me just nice/good there are some things which makes me lol,I dont care rate it what it deserves.
kai?

Well, this portal is more for helping people get better with animation.

And if you're going to base your animation more on the concept, and not the actual animation, then it would be best to make it longer. This thing was, like, 30 seconds long, so one would assume that it would look much better.

And the concept was pretty generic, cliche, and stupid. If you're going to base your animation entirely on the concept of it, then at least make it a little more original. All this was about was a guy that, for some reason, wanted to jump off a cliff. How is that original?

I'm not being harsh, I'm being honest.

Well, just because it's a sort of different idea here, doesn't mean it's original. This isn't the only place that has animations, you know.

And all the elements about your animation you just posted don't really point to any originallity at all.

1: The GTFO thing is definitely unoriginal. I don't see how using internet slang in an animation makes it original. To be honest, it makes it look stupid. And besides, I can't tell you how many people use internet slang in their animations. So, no, that's not original.

2: I don't see how drawing the mother in a funny way points to originallity. And it wasn't that original anyway. All you did was take a character that looks like the main character, and girl him up a bit and give him titties so he looks like a woman, and call him mom. Many people do that in movies and films when they want to show a seldomly shown parental figure in the character's life. It's not original.

3: The good vs. evil thing sitting on his shoulders is probably one of the biggest cliches in the history of entertainment.


And I only pointed out that I was not being harsh because if I were to say what I said to anyone many of the newer members here, they'd get all upset and make excuses. So I commend you for not doing the same and being calm with my advice, even though I'm sure that some random kid on the internet listing grievances about your animation is the last thing you wanna here right now.

kai,
It takes me 10mins to translate it,but I get it =)
I thank you for saying this,because its good to know it.

Anyone else want to leave his feedback?

thats real realy cool

do NOT WAAAAAAANT

...Tawnik...Im new could you help me with full body animes?? ^^ pls