I like that its pretty smooth, just add a little more movement. You're getting there. :)

Holy moly ,well look what we have here .Mike :3
anyway about the animation well its better than the other one but its still quite slow too ,if you fix that problem then you are qualified for your next step to learn ^^

Ok, some CnC's are ready for action:

-Your animation is smooth, but you need to work on the movements and the effects.
-What are you using, Pivot? Well, it is better than most of the animations, but like i said, movement and FX need improvement
-Well, i got nothing, that's it.

lol

this guy is totally gonna become a great animator someday... seeing that he can animate smoothly is a very good sign
good luck on your future

Thanks guys for your feed back, I will use what I learned from you for my next animation.

Edit: Here is a new animation with effects