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Just messing around with my new tablet. CnC is welcome.
Straw Hat Samurai
Started by: Root | Replies: 20 | Views: 2,241
Jun 5, 2015 9:07 PM #1369934
Just messing around with my new tablet. CnC is welcome.
Jun 6, 2015 1:38 AM #1369986
OHHH HOW ITS GOOD TO HAVE A TABLET.... I'm not good with art but nice!
Jun 6, 2015 12:27 PM #1370110
is this supposed to be a scarecrow or somethhing? if it is then it's half perfect
Jun 6, 2015 12:32 PM #1370113
where are his nose, mouth, eyes, ears, eyebrows, cheeks, shoulder, arms and skin? what indicates this character to be a samurai? where's his sword? where's his oriental woven robe?
Jun 6, 2015 3:18 PM #1370140
at the dry cleaners
I like the sketch dude
I like the sketch dude
Jun 6, 2015 4:12 PM #1370153
This piece lacks, well a lot of things frankly. I can't really give you any cnc. You have a meh understanding of lights and darks and stuff I guess.
Jun 6, 2015 5:47 PM #1370165
It's just three sketchy weird shapes. Nothing much here, really.
Jun 6, 2015 10:41 PM #1370232
Scribbles like a motherfucker.
Jun 7, 2015 1:58 AM #1370293
Quote from VeirScribbles like a motherfucker.
fuck yeah
Jun 7, 2015 2:43 AM #1370303
What part of this exactly do you want critiqued?
Jun 7, 2015 2:55 AM #1370305
Quote from Maroonwhere are his nose, mouth, eyes, ears, eyebrows, cheeks, shoulder, arms and skin? what indicates this character to be a samurai? where's his sword? where's his oriental woven robe?
He has a straw hat he must be a samurai.
And like damian (Or naimad Idfk anymore) what are we supposed to critique. It's just a bunch of scribbles.
Jun 7, 2015 5:37 AM #1370362
So... I guess it's a stick in a hat with hatch-shading? I guess it's got a certain... style?... to it, but I can't really say I think it's good or not. It's not a style I've really seen before, there's no real content to it, and all in all it kinda feels messy. I mean, I get that hatch shading doesn't have to be perfect, but there has to be at least some level of consistency so it at least looks clean.
And yeah, there really are no indicators aside from the title that it's a samurai.
And yeah, there really are no indicators aside from the title that it's a samurai.
Jun 7, 2015 5:54 AM #1370370
The hat looks dumb.
Jun 7, 2015 8:34 AM #1370411
I get that it's meant to be stylised, but Jesus is it messy. Hatch shading still needs to be clean, and you could fix this in like 2 minutes. Also, if you're going to try this kind of shading, try using lines that go the other way, it can make the darker areas look less scribbly, and this would look better for a straw hat. And if you're going to call it a samurai, add a but more to it, since there's more than just a hat.
Lastly, if you're going to experiment, you should try a full body sketch, because a stick figure is not going to give you much to work with.
Lastly, if you're going to experiment, you should try a full body sketch, because a stick figure is not going to give you much to work with.
Jun 8, 2015 7:03 AM #1370637
I for one thinks it looks OK.
I mean, it lacks a lot but it isn't really horrible.
I mean, it lacks a lot but it isn't really horrible.