Blade Mercenaries

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Aug 27, 2016 8:47 PM #1459042
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NEVER FEAR! LEVI IS HERE! (I've been busy with school and stuff, sorry.)
BWHAHA! (Click to Show)

(Sorry I haven't been active guys, School is hard. I'll try to reply whenever possible. :) )


Still waiting on Chaotic.
I'm in the same boat Ignus, it's alright. Post when you can.
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Aug 28, 2016 5:40 AM #1459081
AFAIK we're all in the same boat. Don't be expecting the story.
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Aug 28, 2016 5:54 AM #1459083
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AFAIK we're all in the same boat. Don't be expecting the story.


Dat's ok dude we take our time yee
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Aug 29, 2016 3:17 AM #1459171
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Dat's ok dude we take our time yee


I do everything within an hour of it being assigned, (jk not really) but I do everything fast...
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Oct 8, 2016 3:02 AM #1463663
Double posts, ugh, my bad. Anyway, hey leader Haru. I got a plan for switching my characters, so expect that soon enough. But anyway, I was wondering was going on in the clan. Are we gonna do anything anytime soon? Just wondering.
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Oct 9, 2016 3:38 PM #1463811
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Double posts, ugh, my bad. Anyway, hey leader Haru. I got a plan for switching my characters, so expect that soon enough. But anyway, I was wondering was going on in the clan. Are we gonna do anything anytime soon? Just wondering.

We were still doing the story, I was hoping Chaotic could continue on, but he's busy.
You could do another action scene, or I could. Your choice man.
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Oct 9, 2016 6:19 PM #1463830
*Checks the thread after weathering today's XBOXHUEG amounts of RAEG
Still the friendliest and crispest clan.
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Oct 12, 2016 10:59 PM #1464098
HOLY CRAP! THE ENDING!
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Oct 13, 2016 12:47 AM #1464110
Welcome, Dead Man. Hope you won't be one. That would be a shame.
Updating now.
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Oct 24, 2016 12:33 PM #1464863
Alrighty, I really want to make us kill something, so, I guess the newcomer can do it.
Mission for Riley(And Catena if Chaotic is still here) (Click to Show)

Maybe I will make myself do this as well.
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Oct 25, 2016 4:34 AM #1464973
DONE!!
Another Day, Another Target (Click to Show)


Do CnC if you want, I could use some pointers, haven't written in a while.
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Oct 25, 2016 9:02 PM #1465015
CnC for IggyBarns:

Good work overall, esp considering how short it is. My advice would be work on sentence variety -- you tended to start with "Riley did...The guard did...He did...they did...". You get my point. Also, noticed the wep change from the Beretta. Deagles are large, though I guess we already covered the whole beefy-arm deal. Just another note -- most modular weps do NOT assemble "quickly" like...say....in the middle of a battle. Is yours somehow just lego-snap-together? I haven't read your char profile yet to see if that's true.

Again, all-in-all, great job.
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Oct 26, 2016 3:02 PM #1465093
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most modular weps do NOT assemble "quickly" like...say....in the middle of a battle. Is yours somehow just lego-snap-together? I haven't read your char profile yet to see if that's true.

Again, all-in-all, great job.


Thanks man! Yeah, on his char sheet it reads that each weapons comes in two pieces, the barrel and the handle, so yes, they snap together like Lego bricks... XD
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Oct 27, 2016 9:40 AM #1465172
Well, I have nothing to say to this except good job, man. Nothing except good job. As I'llpayus says, could have used some variation, but still really goddamn good imo.
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Nov 15, 2016 1:35 AM #1467085
Happy Birthday to the guy with the spy!