Wait...... I cant redit my page yet. Using phone.... :( the pc is still gone.



Oh wait.... I never thought my phone could edit lol

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When your done improving your rhg,wanna consider fighting me?

Soon enough..... W8, maybe not soon. But.. Once i get my pc ill battle anyone who wants to battle me. :) AFTER i finish ma demo. Oh! Wait, me and Xand already agreed a battle. After the battle i guess. And after xand finish with handy.

No!!!! I'm on your hitlist!

Geez I only use sand, not magic >.< My power is nothing on his weaknesses.

But I will try to fin ways to defeat him ;)

I'm on YOUR hitlist.. :)

Quote from XBlack

Nice RHG mate! I brought you some fan-art

fanart (Click to Show)

Thanks for the fan art btw... Its already on my page.

Weapon Update :o

Quote from knightmare9871

Wait...... I cant redit my page yet. Using phone.... :( the pc is still gone.



Oh wait.... I never thought my phone could edit lol



Soon enough..... W8, maybe not soon. But.. Once i get my pc ill battle anyone who wants to battle me. :) AFTER i finish ma demo. Oh! Wait, me and Xand already agreed a battle. After the battle i guess. And after xand finish with handy.

Its cool,im already battling darknesspawn.

lol.. :D

Story Updated.





How is it??
After my demo.. I will fight four rhgs ( if u read the new story, youll know ) and i will make one ultimate demo for the rematch of shade v ancient spirit ( read story to know who )

Here's my CnC on that demo
Um you gotta ease the movements more like
When you blasted the ground his legs just moved open
Without ease
But basically
It's a dope rhg keep it up

Quote from knightmare9871

Story Updated.
How is it??

Pretty Solid. Well above at least 90% of RHGs I've seen. People just don't seem to put any effort in at all.
"HRD LIF, FAMILEE DED, CUM RHG ND FIT PPL NAOW", pisses me off.

Anyway, enough ranting, this is about you. Good, as mentioned before, but just needs some proofreading. A couple grammar checks would be helpful and you should really put some more detail into his origins. Work on transitions as well. Jumping from Shade's power to Ancient Spirit's in one sentence isn't recommended. And then Ancient Spirits to death match. And then craters to fire. Everything is kind of just jumbled together.

Oh! I know now. You tried to put a lot of information into very few words. This generally doesn't work well unless you are a godlike poet. Your concept is fantastic and the story makes sense, but adding more detail and better transitions and adjectives will really give it emotion.

Just as a quick example; You wrote: "Their match was destructive which made a lot of craters on the moon."

Give it some more depth and it should look more like: "Their clash was unlike any other. With immense power they created massive craters, hurling tons of rock to the depths of space."

To sum it up: Keep the story the way it is! Just give it some better descriptions. Don't take this as professional advice, but hopefully it helps :p

Now hold on... I think it's time...

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Pretty Solid. Well above at least 90% of RHGs I've seen. People just don't seem to put any effort in at all.
"HRD LIF, FAMILEE DED, CUM RHG ND FIT PPL NAOW", pisses me off.

Anyway, enough ranting, this is about you. Good, as mentioned before, but just needs some proofreading. A couple grammar checks would be helpful and you should really put some more detail into his origins. Work on transitions as well. Jumping from Shade's power to Ancient Spirit's in one sentence isn't recommended. And then Ancient Spirits to death match. And then craters to fire. Everything is kind of just jumbled together.

Oh! I know now. You tried to put a lot of information into very few words. This generally doesn't work well unless you are a godlike poet. Your concept is fantastic and the story makes sense, but adding more detail and better transitions and adjectives will really give it emotion.

Just as a quick example; You wrote: "Their match was destructive which made a lot of craters on the moon."

Give it some more depth and it should look more like: "Their clash was unlike any other. With immense power they created massive craters, hurling tons of rock to the depths of space."

To sum it up: Keep the story the way it is! Just give it some better descriptions. Don't take this as professional advice, but hopefully it helps :p

Tnx. I'll try to re edit it once i get my new PC which is taking longer than it's supposed to. And also, I'm not that good making stories. I just tried to make my story better than most.

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Here's my CnC on that demo
Um you gotta ease the movements more like
When you blasted the ground his legs just moved open
Without ease
But basically
It's a dope rhg keep it up

If you completely read my page you'll see that I'm still improving my demo but still won't happen unless my PC arrives which is taking so long.

Another story update.
'drbrownca' - Thanks for the help and advice, I made (if not the best) a better one. :)

And the reason why I'm only updating the story is because I cannot animate without my PC.

I have a question. Does only magic deal X2 damage to him? Or just abilities that produce light that your character naturally has?