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Jul 1, 2015 9:00 PM #1378058
i feel like that part when he is pounding that guys face in on the wall should have been faster and with more impact.
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Jul 1, 2015 10:12 PM #1378100
Oh. You're back!

Want to join our clan? 2 people trying out so far. PM me if you are interested.
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?95109-FREELANCER-NEW-CLAN!!!
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Jul 1, 2015 10:55 PM #1378132
Alright, let me just point stuff out:
- If he had the power to drain people, why doesnt he frequently use it? I mean, do you want to get beaten up badly before defeating the opponent?
- Doesn't the scientist know what he's giving to him? So why only locks, i was guessing a room thats unescapeable but whatever
- Demo needs to be faster, you should've at least made the fps higher
- "He can add green fire to his hands" I think the right word there is ignite or create.
- The only real weakness you have there is the teleporting one, the other 2 are just pointing out stuff, and your character would'nt even be that dumb to go out to cold weather if the fight took place there.

Nonethless, Nice RHG man, good luck with everything else
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Jul 2, 2015 12:05 AM #1378156
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Oh. You're back!

Want to join our clan? 2 people trying out so far. PM me if you are interested.
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?95109-FREELANCER-NEW-CLAN!!!


Dude,He's Trying Out 4 Mai Clan > : D
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Jul 2, 2015 12:24 AM #1378163
Rhg pages are not places to recruit people into your clans. If you want someone to join, PM or VM them next time.
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Jul 2, 2015 1:07 AM #1378182
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Rhg pages are not places to recruit people into your clans. If you want someone to join, PM or VM them next time.


Aree You Saying That To Me Or To Kysu?,Because He Was Already Tryouting Before I Made That Post
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Jul 2, 2015 2:25 AM #1378203
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Alright, let me just point stuff out:
- If he had the power to drain people, why doesnt he frequently use it? I mean, do you want to get beaten up badly before defeating the opponent?
- Doesn't the scientist know what he's giving to him? So why only locks, i was guessing a room thats unescapeable but whatever
- Demo needs to be faster, you should've at least made the fps higher
- "He can add green fire to his hands" I think the right word there is ignite or create.
- The only real weakness you have there is the teleporting one, the other 2 are just pointing out stuff, and your character would'nt even be that dumb to go out to cold weather if the fight took place there.

Nonethless, Nice RHG man, good luck with everything else


Sorry english Isn't my primary language wich is why I suck at it ,anyway:
-One of the reasons why he dosen't drain energy from his enemies is because he wants an epic fight :P kinda full of pure action and stuff ,he can sometimes forget about it too :P
-I kinda felt like the fps would be a little too much speedy If I increase it
-yeah I'll fix that :P
-and finally what I meant with cold weather is that water or ice would greatly make him weak
Thanks for telling me what to fix :)
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Jul 2, 2015 7:20 AM #1378241
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Sorry english Isn't my primary language wich is why I suck at it ,anyway:
-One of the reasons why he dosen't drain energy from his enemies is because he wants an epic fight :P kinda full of pure action and stuff ,he can sometimes forget about it too :P
-I kinda felt like the fps would be a little too much speedy If I increase it
-yeah I'll fix that :P
-and finally what I meant with cold weather is that water or ice would greatly make him weak
Thanks for telling me what to fix :)


No problem, just helping a fellow stickpage member, good luck on your journey with Laixor
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Jul 2, 2015 9:48 AM #1378274
Ty ,I sure am gonna stick here for a while :P ,also I'm making a new demo (probely 30 secs or less).
I'll appreaciate it if you CnC it a little.
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Jul 2, 2015 10:08 AM #1378280
Epic looking forward to seeing you in the battle field
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Jul 2, 2015 11:06 AM #1378293
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Ty ,I sure am gonna stick here for a while :P ,also I'm making a new demo (probely 30 secs or less).
I'll appreaciate it if you CnC it a little.


Im not sure if i can give you detailed CnC since i dont use pivot but flash, a more experienced pivot user should be CnCing you but ill try.
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Jul 2, 2015 11:26 AM #1378303
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Im not sure if i can give you detailed CnC since i dont use pivot but flash, a more experienced pivot user should be CnCing you but ill try.

I'll do it!!
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Jul 2, 2015 11:50 AM #1378308
ALRIGHT!!! I'm done finishing my 2nd demo :) go check it out in the front page.
Note:took me about 6-5 hours to finish It :3
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Jul 2, 2015 12:14 PM #1378315
You should really take more time and effort in making these, i mean, dont be in a rush man, take your time to improve anyway:

- I have no idea, but the sticks seem "cute" to me, and i say that word rarely
- You got it fast, nice, although try to add more impact to the attacks, except of the upper kick, that had force to it
- I dont like how your guy was just still while his arms were the ones moving, make every body parts move so it will look more smoother
- That explosion definitely needs work, but was that made in flash or pivot? Seemed like it was made in flash
- Take your time, dont rush 5-6 hours, take at least some more if you wanna do something that can make you improve and get better
- I also dont like that part where i see a black dot just moving slowly, until after a couple second you popped up and ignited flames to your hands
- When you're about to ignite flames, try making the hand do a gesture so it has that badass feeling
- The angles need work but you're good.

Well it was entertaining overall, but still needs work, you can always get better overtime when you really give your efforts.
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Jul 2, 2015 12:36 PM #1378316
1.Do you suggest that I Increase the thickness of my sticks or decrease for more uncuteness? :P
2.Thanks kinda took me a while to get a hang on it.
3.well I didn't know what and where to move in order to maintain the realism and smoothness
4.Yeah I know I'm really not that skilled in making sticks but I'll learn how someday, and it was made with pivot
5.I'll try to decrease the amount of time taken :P
6.about that black dot...well that was the black stickmen but I didn't know how to animate it it in a very small stick so I used it ,also if you didn't understand that part. Well here's how... so after I did that repeated punch combo in mid-air and teleported behind the stick to hit it from behind, I teleported once again above it for a sky dive :P (I'm pretty sure you got it from the first look though)
7.To be honest no one has ever told me what angles are and what they do and what do they help with in animations...that might be the reason why the angles are bad lol.
8.So should I show his fingers or something to ignite the fire with a gesture?
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