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Mar 15, 2017 4:01 AM #1477607
Wait, some edits need to be done on the front page first. Loops could you send me the original text with all the codes via PM? I'll refine it (use the edit option and copy your text and then paste it into a Code format!)
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Mar 15, 2017 8:02 PM #1477628
sure
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Mar 16, 2017 4:34 PM #1477663
thanks s.a for helping to update the page design!
EDIT:
i'm done with my weekly
http://loopsbs.deviantart.com/art/weeklygen-1-669341285?ga_submit_new=10%3A1489687441
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Mar 16, 2017 7:55 PM #1477674
Quote from Loops
thanks s.a for helping to update the page design!
EDIT:
i'm done with my weekly
http://loopsbs.deviantart.com/art/weeklygen-1-669341285?ga_submit_new=10%3A1489687441


Woah nice. I actually thought I'd be the first to submit a weekly again. Welp guess I thought wrong.
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Mar 16, 2017 9:08 PM #1477677
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Woah nice. I actually thought I'd be the first to submit a weekly again. Welp guess I thought wrong.


thanks and rips
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Mar 17, 2017 10:37 AM #1477692
Whale then, Here's mine; :v
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Mar 19, 2017 10:00 AM #1477755
Nice.

Applying comedy into your animations is good guys. Sundown, that last bit of yours was amazing. The run aspect needs more improvement as it felt like I was watching a loop. Don't be afraid to animate runs with 3-4 frames only. Putting too much frames on a run makes it look too slow if you don't know what you're doing with the frames.

Weekly #1:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mZfuYVyiWEU

I recommend a cycle of the members giving out weeklies. Like an order of sorts:

Zero -> Sundown -> S.A. -> Loops (Repeat)
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Mar 19, 2017 4:12 PM #1477764
Yeah, alright.

Zero, I think this part of the animation could use some retouching because the center of gravity wouldn't normally enable the blue stickman to recover from that land. Otherwise, the animation was really well made, nice work! Especially liked the way you used the swoosh sounds.

Sundown, the only issue I found, apart from what Zero pointed out, is the way the VCam was used to give that shake effect at the top of the obstacles. It could use some polishing.
Remaining bit was awesome!

Loops, that was a fun little animation you did there! I really liked the texture on the boulder, how'd you come up with that idea?
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Mar 20, 2017 2:08 AM #1477779
Good points there S.A.! Well said. I definitely agree with your C&C on my animation. Thanks for pointing it out.

Now, let's all get to Weekly #2. Someone post what they want as a weekly #2 or I'll post by default in 12 hours.
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Mar 20, 2017 3:52 PM #1477805
All corrections have been taken, thanks for the CnC.

PS i have no idea for Weekly 2 So *Points towards another member.*
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Mar 20, 2017 5:11 PM #1477807
Thanks Zero!
Here's one:
Weekly #2 - Animate a scene showcasing your character standing/sitting etc. in a 360° camera rotation around him/her/them.
Due Date: 28-03-2017
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Mar 20, 2017 9:06 PM #1477811
nice idea fam,2 days before the due date i'll make a strawpoll to decide which one to do!(if anybody suggests any other idea)
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Mar 21, 2017 4:20 AM #1477832
Lol what due date?
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Mar 21, 2017 9:55 AM #1477843
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Thanks Zero!
Here's one:
Weekly #2 - Animate a scene showcasing your character standing/sitting etc. in a 360° camera rotation around him/her/them.
Due Date: None

Sounds neat.

A deadline should be set though so we can have consistent weeklies. If others decide to pass in a later time, that's fine too.
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Mar 21, 2017 3:52 PM #1477847
A week from today it is!
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