Golden Wing

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Jul 16, 2015 11:35 AM #1383563

Name:Golden Wing/Gregory

Abilities:Can teleport to either Heaven,Earth or Hell.
Can fly.

Able to shoot yellow plasma beams from his hands.

Weaknesses:
Can be hurt by mortals.

Can only fly 10 inches above ground level.

Story:Golden Wing was named Gregory in his mortal life.One day he was in the forest and then he saw a light.It was so bright that he died of dehydration.He was then called by God to be one of the Elite Angels.

Demo:
Demo

Battles:

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Jul 17, 2015 3:21 AM #1383869

Ok here we go

Bro… (Click to Show)

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Jul 17, 2015 5:07 AM #1383910

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Ok here we go

Whats up with that demo man? you should try to make a better one :3

Learn how to make a stick figure…

How can he be an "elite angel" if he can only fly 10 inches above the ground.

Also why only 10 inches? there is no point in flying if you can't actually FLY.

"it was so bright that he died of dehydration" … I'm pretty sure thats not how that works bro

to sum up just fix … everything

It looks like his format is alright since Shadowkirby didn't lock this up, so who are you exactly to tell anyone to fix anything? Those who call the shots never said that RHG stories had to have logical consistency. Those who call the shots never said that demos are supposed to have more than 8 frames. Those who call the shots never said that anyone needs to explain their RHG's weakness.

Some things you can do with the ability to fly 10-inches off the ground: travel faster, prevent death from falling from high places, increase your maneuverability in combat, add both feet in your arsenal instead of only being able to use one of them for kicking, and use it to give yourself a boost when you want to jump. Why do you even have to question his power if that's what he chooses?

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Jul 17, 2015 7:45 AM #1383948

So we have a demi-angel or whatever..lol,I suggest you check some tutorials on youtube..:D

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Jul 17, 2015 8:31 AM #1383970

Welcome to the page
Personally I would recommend using pivot since your stick figure construction skills aren't the best in your demo
Tutorials definitely helped me out as well, I can see that you are just now starting to animate but don't let the other/better people intimidate you
One day you may even surpass them
If anyone gives you advice that sounds harsh on here don't take it to heart, they're just trying to motivate you and help
Your RHG is pretty original just like Smile said, the flying feature can help when it comes down to quick travel and combat
Your RHG reminds me of Pit in the new SuperSmashBros(He has a straight shot winged dash)
Good luck with future battles

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Jul 17, 2015 1:21 PM #1384019

Gl with this dude, and make your frame rate about 18-24. ( I bet if he fly limitless he'll be so overpowered by just blasting you plasma beams...)

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Jul 17, 2015 2:41 PM #1384043

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Gl with this dude, and make your frame rate about 18-24. ( I bet if he fly limitless he'll be so overpowered by just blasting you plasma beams...)

Yeah... i also thought about that.. I mean ordinary human rhgs that isnt fast is will have a freaking hard time to fight him

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Jul 17, 2015 2:42 PM #1384044

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Gl with this dude, and make your frame rate about 18-24. ( I bet if he fly limitless he'll be so overpowered by just blasting you plasma beams...)

Yeah... i also thought about that.. I mean ordinary human rhgs that isnt fast will have a freaking hard time to fight him

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Jul 18, 2015 11:12 AM #1384338

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Yeah... i also thought about that.. I mean ordinary human rhgs that isnt fast will have a freaking hard time to fight him

Lol what will the his opponents do? Throw rocks or weapons on golden wing? PLUS PitchEnder reminds me of devi, no offense.

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Jul 18, 2015 11:28 AM #1384341

Quote from knightmare9871
Yeah... i also thought about that.. I mean ordinary human rhgs that isnt fast will have a freaking hard time to fight him

Lol what will the his opponents do? Throw rocks or weapons on golden wing? PLUS PitchEnder reminds me of devi, no offense.