Really nice and humorous idea, but it seems kinda rushed. At the beginning, the blurred city MC, it looks really nice, though your stick bends too much, and the smoke doesnt look really nice, kind of wobbly. At the end you can see you didnt pay time: You draw your letters instead of normal text, you used line instead of brush, and the left leg of black was shaking like hell when he smacked the yellow stick away
yeah, i really rushed it (I started it last night). As for the smoke, i'm kinda rusty(its been, like, 4 months), so instead of makeing a new mc, I looked for an older one. it was origionaly only half of the mc on this anim, and it looked fine like that, but it didnt work the way it was(it wqas made for someone running on the ground), so I attempted to make a copy and morph them together. I guess it didnt turn out so well. And as for the line instead of brush, I couldnt make one of the giant guys look right with brush, so did it with line. problem is, I'm not that good with line anymore...hence the wobbling leg lol. I tried to fix it, but, yeah...