Unbounded-CNC

Great stickfigure movement for the green stickman. If the giant stickman is a stickman and not a walking golume stickman I would believe the very stiffness would work if not then your too stiff. So, if the giant got his leg stuck in the earth plung that leg more deeply into the earth show some rocks coming up from the ground like he moved the earth. The dust cloud we are going to work on your special effects a bit more. Your whip movement was great very fluid So back to the giant stickfigure he mostly reminds me of a statue since he doesn't have alot of life to him. But even tho that is the case with the giant stickfigure your green stickfigure has alot of movement to him and is very fluid. 7/10

Charry- CNC
What can I say your stickfigure movements are awsome but, I would like to see more life in your opponet instead of it being a rage doll. I would like to see from you more backgrounds instead of the traditional white background back land. Also to deliever some more impact into your punches add some smoke effects to show more of a impact when hitting the grounds. 8.5/10

Haru- I want you to animate in 24fps you see big different when doing it that way your animation my friend is so slow so I can't feel the POW ya know. I can say you do have a smooth falling guy but he looks like he floating down to earth instead of falling he should really be sped up alot. The Very beginning tho you comobos look really improved from last time I saw you animation. You do need to work on your leg placement when walking your character(s) or running your character(s) to your opponet. You got some nice angle in there just remeber to slow down and take a breath away from the computer to come back to it.
4/10

Daighre-CNC
Your effects and that you added facial expression that it is super smooth is awsome. We are going to work on backgrounds to show movement so they don't look like there next to the wall and some vcam to help with that. 8.5/10

Krylun- *Not Completed YET* Has Until Midnight Tomorrow Night


Tun3-CNC

Since this is a collab animtion that you are showing I can't give you points on background since it is a collab part. So I have to Minus -2 points just for that. What I can say is your stickfigure is smooth and the one action that he does do trying to get his senpia to notice him tho he fails was very hillarious. I give you the score 6.5/10 Since I want to see more from you but I do believe you have protential

RUSHED Updated CNC since I only had the one for some reason T.T I loved the new animation that you sent even tho it ws rushed it super smoothed and shows alot of your talent. ....THO I wished you finished it. 7/10 for not being finished. I also would like to see a background from you also .
Your third animation I saw that you pmed me on skype your combo did look a little stiff but I see how much you improved on your second animation and that this is where you where and that is where you are going nice. For this one here I give you a 6.5/10
Over all score 7.0 Only the 7.0 cuz it was not finished :)

Yes-CNC

Where do I begin your walk animation that you sent me was very nice and smooth but it did not show me what you are truely capable of....So for that alone I give you a 3/10 A 3 cuz the walk cycle is smooth and is what I'm looking for.
I am glad you gave me another animation to CNC on. Your movement on this animation was very stiff remeber to put some inbetweents to help smooth it out alot better also keep watching your animation ALOT to see where your trouble areas are. To show that your character is flying in the sky give him some background a line on the ground makes it look like your trying to do a angle instead of flying. You Animation for this one is 4/10 Grand total of 3.5/10
You still got a long way to go my friend you also had a whole month to work on the animation remeber to take my advice next time and go slow and rewatch it over and over until you are satisfied with it. Then go on to the next step like background, faces , Special effects and Lastly FULL BODY!!


danickname- *Not Completed* Has Until Midnight Tomorrow Night

RandomPivot -- Since I'm unsure if you used flash or pivot I've got to go bye what your giving me here. If you used flashed we got to work on your special effects to make them better then what they are. If you used Pivot less is more my friend on that big blast there will also have to work on weapon constructions. Again you didn't have to rush to show me a animation just a good effort would be most helpfull. I would like to see more movement in your stickfigure instead of him just hangout in one corner of the stage remeber you can go forwards and backwards. Tho the little personality that I did see in your animation gives you to the grand score of 4.5/10

EarthToExodus--Contiueing To make HIS TRYOUT *NotCompleted* Has until midnight tomorrow Night

Revenant104 ---CNC

Since you are a late entry to Wisps I knew you didn't have alot of time to animate. So I just going to go over what you have shown me. So for animation 1 that you showed me I love that you added hair to your stickfigure. You special effect for animation 1 that you submitted needs some work but you'll get there. There not alot of movement with this animation but I get the jest of what going on. 5/10
For Second animataion Will work on backgrounds the sky is not bad tho. i like the begining with the spot light moveing around revealing great use of mask. You need to work on the hair movement a bit more and special effects a bit more. Your use of the vcam is good but could be better. Also there is one part in there where in the cinmatic his arm look very tiny rember he got a upper arm and lower arms 6.5/10
Final Score 6/10