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RHG - LIGHTBRINGER

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Aug 19, 2015 10:51 AM #1397079
Name: Lightbringer
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Color: #126D6C
Story:

He is born from the north where light pillars can be seen, born to be a guardian but destined to battle, he himself was so bad at fighting with people before so he tried to excel and have more experience, after 5 years he thinks he is ready to fight with much stronger people.. He came back to the north weeks later, he found his family outside waiting for him but.. He found them hanging on the tree, he thought it was suicide. Then, he saw two people running away with blood on their hands, and knife on their bags. Without noticing, he was slowly turning white, and he ran very fast towards them and took them to the nearest police station for what they have done in his family. After his family's burial, he went back to the station (where the two criminals are jailed) he asked the case to begone and dont do any action for them.. The secretary was surprised, he asked "why do you let this be sir?" "Nah!" He replied "My parents are dead lol, there is no one to receive justice now, but me" Lightbringer added.

Story : After that fight, he discovered he already got control of his other form, he can now access to that form being angry or outraging. And he's got used to it. One day while he was walking around, someone picked him a fight, and suddenly.. (to be continued)





Abilities:
Sword usage, control of lightning, BEASTMODE.
Beastmode: Control of red lightning, insane speed, less talkative, he turns white, (glows blue when focused)

HEY UPDATE: After his battle with Goldrush, his beastmode is now accessible without rage.
Weaknesses: In beast mode it's hard for him to focus, sometimes goes out of control that leads him to wrong decisions, in normal. more likely accuracy of his aiming skills is pretty average..




Personality:
Talkative (he reacts often) :p
Confident ;)
Wise :rolleyes:
Strategic :confused:
Kind (before/after battle) :D

DEMO:
Click Here..


Favorite Quote: "I also can predict the future.. You will lose, that's your future.."
Most Used Reaction: AWWW ___

His one annoying Quote: "I will give you a chance to run before we start!"

..AVAILABILITY..
YES

Lookin' for an RHG battle ^_^, but I think I'm about to find 1

Battles..
LIGHTBRINGER vs Gold Rush - http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?96984-LIGHTBRINGER_XD-vs-PiNeWeInD WIN
Scores: Win/Lose
1/0


BEST WISHES FOR YOU!! ;)
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Aug 19, 2015 12:59 PM #1397124
Nice over all need to fix your spoiler code though and could you change the color of your ability section
yellow is nice and all but bright background and bright font, well it would seem I can't clearly see your abilities.
well I think that's all I can suggest.
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Aug 19, 2015 1:53 PM #1397157
Quote from Revenant104
Nice over all need to fix your spoiler code though and could you change the color of your ability section
yellow is nice and all but bright background and bright font, well it would seem I can't clearly see your abilities.
well I think that's all I can suggest.


Yep.. Thanks for giving tips ;).. Is red fine :P ?
Also, ready when you are :D
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Aug 19, 2015 2:01 PM #1397160
I really wanna battle dis rhg...Once I finally make my own...Nice rhg though :D
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Aug 19, 2015 3:40 PM #1397198
Cool, demo makes it out that he is really fast.

GL in the future
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Aug 20, 2015 3:41 AM #1397352
Nice demo it was short but I get the over all of your character :)
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Aug 20, 2015 6:45 AM #1397397
Thank you for those..
I'll do my best in battles :D
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Aug 20, 2015 8:35 AM #1397407
Quote from LIGHTBRINGER_XD
Yep.. Thanks for giving tips ;).. Is red fine :P ?
Also, ready when you are :D


yeah red will do just fine :D I can read his abilities clearly now without getting my self into a seizure xd
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Aug 20, 2015 5:05 PM #1397518
Bruh. Dat story was sick.

In all seriousness, the concept seemed alright, and it started to sound really deep. But then it kind of devolved into "what am I even reading?" I don't mean to be rude, and like I said, you seemed to have a good rough copy, just needs some detail and grammar checks.

On other things, great RHG!
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Aug 20, 2015 8:27 PM #1397566
Cool. I like this RHG. Best quote ever 11/10.
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Aug 21, 2015 1:28 AM #1397627
Quote from Kyzu
Cool. I like this RHG. Best quote ever 11/10.


Shortest RHG ever?
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