Haname - update- The Experiment

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Aug 20, 2015 11:15 PM #1397594

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Aug 21, 2015 5:52 AM #1397692

Hmmmmmm i like it. its quite orriginal and has a nice demo!

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Aug 21, 2015 6:16 AM #1397695

Quote from PiNeWeInD
Hmmmmmm i like it. its quite orriginal and has a nice demo!

XD thanks man

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Aug 22, 2015 12:24 AM #1397978

Pretty original character, I especially love his lore. Your demo is pretty good, but you should work on smoothness. My only big issue with this RHG is that his weaknesses don't really outweigh his abilities. Also, maybe elaborate on what "godly power" means.

Sweet RHG nonetheless. Can't wait to see it in action

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Aug 22, 2015 12:45 AM #1397982

Quote from drbrownca
Pretty original character, I especially love his lore. Your demo is pretty good, but you should work on smoothness. My only big issue with this RHG is that his weaknesses don't really outweigh his abilities. Also, maybe elaborate on what "godly power" means.

Sweet RHG nonetheless. Can't wait to see it in action

I think he means "Holy Power" aka White Magic. Just a thing all demons are afraid of in the RHG universe.

Can we be allies? I'm trying to get allies that are "evil" RHGs for my story.

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Aug 22, 2015 1:11 AM #1397991

Quote from PitchEnder
I think he means "Holy Power" aka White Magic. Just a thing all demons are afraid of in the RHG universe.

Can we be allies? I'm trying to get allies that are "evil" RHGs for my story.

XD what story are you talking about?
But yeah I will be in your story

Quote from drbrownca
Pretty original character, I especially love his lore. Your demo is pretty good, but you should work on smoothness. My only big issue with this RHG is that his weaknesses don't really outweigh his abilities. Also, maybe elaborate on what "godly power" means.

Sweet RHG nonetheless. Can't wait to see it in action

XD thanks man, an yeah smoothness is my main priority right now

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Oct 17, 2015 6:25 AM #1409203

Hmm the movements were kinda stiff but good rhg and nice lore

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Oct 17, 2015 8:18 PM #1409299

Eh. Cool lore but demoneeds work

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Oct 18, 2015 6:30 AM #1409412

Overall, I think you did a pretty good job with your RHG. I like the story and his abilities are original and aren't too unbalanced. My only complaint is that your demo could have used a bit more work like smoothing and adding a few more moves or at least showing him fighting an enemy.

GL in future battles man :D