Asura, the Fallen God

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Aug 28, 2015 3:37 PM #1399929

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Abilities:

- He's a very skilled martial arts fighter and has super strength.

- He can teleport.

- Has super endurance in battle. He withstands a lot of damage.

- He's a very skilled sword fighter.

- He can manipulate light, fire and shadows. (He can only wields fire and light, but makes shadow beams out of the ground and this sort of things)

- Can summon two sword: a fire sword and a light sword

Weaknesses:

- Fast enemies. He can teleport, but don't runs fast.

- Shadow attacks. He's a deitie from heaven, so he get hurt by shadows. (Only get hurt If he is touched by shadows)

- Demonic attacks.

- Black Magic.

- Ranged foes

Story:

There are 3 planes: the Heaven plane, the Earth plane and the Hell plane. Six deities ruled over the Heavens and the Earth, but they had total control only of the Heavens, they could only care of the Earth and its population. They were all brothers. Asura was the god of Light (this includes the sunlight, that is why he manipulates fire) and had a good heart. His brothers had the heart corrupted for the thirst for power, they wanted to totally dominate the Earth plane and suck the lives of the humans and then build a new empire in Earth. Asura discovered their plan, they tried to convince Asura to help then, but nor in his dreams he would let someone die or get hurt for their ambition. Asura was considered a traitor because he didn't help his brothers, and in Heaven traitors deserve death. Asura killed four of his brothers in combat, he was forced to do it. His other two brothers were priests, they hadn't any warrior skills, so they fled and hid. Asura found them, but when he went to kill they, a portal opens in his back and suck him to hell. His brothers banished him to Hell. Now Asura was considered a demon that fought against the gods in heaven. In the hell he learned the shadow arts from a demon, he promised sell his soul for that, but he lied, he just killed the demon after get the powers.
He tried to back to Heaven to kill his lasting brothers with the shadow arts, but he was banished and couldn't enter in Heaven anymore. Asura wandered in Earth for many years waiting his brothers come to the final showdown, until he noticed they wouldn't come, so he decided turn in a RHG.

Personality:

Sometimes Asura is a shy guy, but when you know him better he can be very sociable and funny. He hates be called a demon or a traitor.

Demo:

http://makkarrao.deviantart.com/art/RHG-Demo-556328363

More demos coming soon!

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Aug 28, 2015 4:53 PM #1399953

your demo doesn't work.

also I don't understand why you made him able to control shadows when one of his weaknesses is shadows.
and in my understanding demons usually take your soul before they give you what they promised, if they give it to you at all.

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Aug 28, 2015 7:36 PM #1399994

Quote from XaioShadow
your demo doesn't work.

also I don't understand why you made him able to control shadows when one of his weaknesses is shadows.
and in my understanding demons usually take your soul before they give you what they promised, if they give it to you at all.

Demo is fixed. He's is able to control shadow cus he learned it to kill his brothers, and he doesnt control it directly, he does the same thing that he does with light as you can see in the demo, he doesnt touch it.
And in every place there are dumbasses, maybe he found one in hell =p

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Aug 29, 2015 12:39 AM #1400083

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Wouldn't the abilities of controlling shadows do absolutely nothing but shadows can't harm you?

Only If he touches it, but he doesn't touch, he makes it out of the surface of something, like the light beam in the demo, he only wields fire and light. It's better I edit the post to the people here understand better xD

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Aug 30, 2015 2:17 AM #1400358

Good thing you're not Shinokk lol.

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Aug 31, 2015 7:52 AM #1400749

So what does hes weapon look like

also fast enemies cant be his weakness because why do he need to run if he can teleport?

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Aug 31, 2015 8:49 PM #1400938

Quote from Ernest The Reaper
So what does hes weapon look like

also fast enemies cant be his weakness because why do he need to run if he can teleport?

Teleportation doesn't mean that he can go to long distances, this means that he can switch his position in near areas

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Sep 3, 2015 3:07 PM #1401603

Asura, the Fallen God..... Satan, the fallen angel. Asura is satan confirmed. also, what do the swords look like

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Sep 7, 2015 3:42 PM #1402423

Quote from Macarrão
Only If he touches it, but he doesn't touch, he makes it out of the surface of something, like the light beam in the demo, he only wields fire and light. It's better I edit the post to the people here understand better xD

this is getting too abstract
i don't get how shadow beams would work if he is basically a light user
and how do the shadows even get there
need explanation

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Sep 13, 2015 3:33 PM #1403367

Quote from Ashero
this is getting too abstract
i don't get how shadow beams would work if he is basically a light user
and how do the shadows even get there
need explanation

after being banned to hell asura stolen shadow power from a demon to kill his brothers (cause as gods shadows would kill them easier), idk if is my fault if you misunderstood the story, but i think i wrote this there

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Sep 13, 2015 4:13 PM #1403371

You could have picked some music for your demo that isn't white noise, you know.

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Sep 15, 2015 10:36 PM #1403769

Quote from Charry
You could have picked some music for your demo that isn't white noise, you know.

^^ This is MBV, it's one of my favorites bands and their songs are all that way. I think the "white noise" you say are the guitar drones