Hey guyth Revenant104 challenged me to battle. we made our animation for 2 weeks (approximately)

This is our result

Revenant104 :
http://revenant104.deviantart.com/art/RHG-1-Xand-VS-Blight-556826237?ga_submit_new=10%253A1440807325

Xand :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAAmy5Y3h_o&feature=youtu.be

Vote for what ever you wish for! :D

What I thought:

Xand's animation felt smoother, although it was too short in my opinion. Revenant's was also short, but it was a little choppy in some areas, and I felt like the intro was too long. My vote goes to Xand.


Edited:
I didn't watch till the very end of Xand's animation, so his animation is longer than I originally thought, but still short. Also, your lip syncing was a little off, but that doesnt really matter.

Okay you both need to work on your movements,

Xand: At 1:18 I noticed that your foot placement and the head were a bit sturdy, and somehow your sticks are shrinking.

Revenant: You need to learn easing bro, you need it in the part when xand steps his feet and your RHG performing a blast. You also need to work on your effects ...

BUT!!! You both did a good work, and hope you both improve more and keep practicing!!! :D

Quote from NiNmArS

Okay you both need to work on your movements,

Xand: At 1:18 I noticed that your foot placement and the head were a bit sturdy, and somehow your sticks are shrinking.

Revenant: You need to learn easing bro, you need it in the part when xand steps his feet and your RHG performing a blast. You also need to work on your effects ...

BUT!!! You both did a good work, and hope you both improve more and keep practicing!!! :D

Yeah i thought so hahah ty for your comment it seems xand got this win

Quote from An Asian Potato

What I thought:

Xand's animation felt smoother, although it was too short in my opinion. Revenant's was also short, but it was a little choppy in some areas, and I felt like the intro was too long. My vote goes to Xand.


Edited:
I didn't watch till the very end of Xand's animation, so his animation is longer than I originally thought, but still short. Also, your lip syncing was a little off, but that doesnt really matter.

wow I didn't expect someone to say that my animation is smooth. because my fps is usually 12 so... yeah. thanks though!

Quote from NiNmArS

Okay you both need to work on your movements,

Xand: At 1:18 I noticed that your foot placement and the head were a bit sturdy, and somehow your sticks are shrinking.

Revenant: You need to learn easing bro, you need it in the part when xand steps his feet and your RHG performing a blast. You also need to work on your effects ...

BUT!!! You both did a good work, and hope you both improve more and keep practicing!!! :D

Dang! Whenever I animate, I've always noticed on my characters shrinking >.< I need to work on that

12 FPS!!!! you should practice 18, 20 or 24 fps >.< or if you keep using 12 fps ( its like double-framing in 24 fps) make sure movements are far each frame. (hope you understand that lol)

Quote from NiNmArS

12 FPS!!!! you should practice 18, 20 or 24 fps >.< or if you keep using 12 fps ( its like double-framing in 24 fps) make sure movements are far each frame. (hope you understand that lol)

yeah I understand... I've wondered why my animations are bad.. it is because of my freaking FPS!!!

from now on im gonna do 24 fps c:

Good job, Xand.

I vote for you since your animation is better.

Great battle guys,voted for Xand because his was smoother and had better effects.
Tho both of your animations could've been longer if the draw time was approximately 2 weeks

Quote from knightmare9871

Good job, Xand.

I vote for you since your animation is better.

Thanks :3

Quote from Horizon28

Great battle guys,voted for Xand because his was smoother and had better effects.
Tho both of your animations could've been longer if the draw time was approximately 2 weeks

I guess so :D

Quote from Horizon28

Great battle guys,voted for Xand because his was smoother and had better effects.
Tho both of your animations could've been longer if the draw time was approximately 2 weeks

Hahaha 2 weeks was a great time span yeah having to redoalot of things gotto me anyways i lose this one hahaha

Xand... you are improving quickly because of the tablets power, well fix the resizing


Revenant... work on your easing you will improve if you focus on the distances of your sticks

voted for Xand

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Xand... you are improving quickly because of the tablets power, well fix the resizing


Revenant... work on your easing you will improve if you focus on the distances of your sticks

voted for Xand

Easing im working on it or atlrast practicing

Both of them are good

so heres my review:

Xand : Really Improving,nice lip sync,Hidden fight scene(you should make them not hidden),great story so i rate you 7/10

Revenant104 : Very few fight scene, nice effects though,the angles are good so i rate you 6.2/10

so looks like xand have taken my vote,but dont worry revenant you did great too.THIS IS JUST MY REVIEW

P.S.: I'm here to help, not to degrade nor tease someone..

To Revenant104:
still, choppy...
Here are the things I Observed..
- Its a bit short tho.. It is kinda nice.. maybe practice more and then try a little longer
- Choppy, I have seen you are probably using 12 fps or something lower than 24.. You should practice 24 fps
- The effects.. maybe in lightning set a glow.. like Blue:5..

For Xand
You are far better and here are some of my advises
- Short... Maybe a bit more longer like 30 seconds that are full of damn combos..
- Face expression, Lips.. Some frames are likely to be unnecessary you might wanna check them "thrice" ..

My vote goes to Xand..