Name:SpeMen
Age:10592(but seen young because from past)




Abilities:Death Staff,Spear Rope,Smoke Bomb,Toughness,Magic


Weakness:Without Death Staff he cannot fight great
The Toughness didnt effect Punch Kick Or Weapon(i.e Sword,Gun)


Demo:http://sta.sh/0yjkigapkix


Story:One day,their was a legend name SpeMen.He has Death Staff,Magic and Toughness ability.
He was so famous and strong in long time ago.Then there was people named Nortom he was jealous of SpeMen ability.
He find his men and want to kill SpeMen but their dont know SpeMen weakness.SpeMen fight them and finally
Nortom figured the SpeMen weakness that they can use sword or spear to kill him.Then SpeMen is dying.He cursed
At 10572 he will rise again.After 10572 years later he rise from his cemetry.And kill Notrom generation
Then he join a RHG.



point:0/0


battles:none

Avaibality
YES

Hm......
I have no idea what is going in in your demo.
The blood effect is okay, but the black stickman to the left kinda jumps up after being stabbed, and he makes no limb movement whatsoever. And what are hose two lines. Coming out Him? SpeMen doesn't reall move much, I would suggest you work on that.

And what does the death staff do, besides being just a regular staff?
Besides these things I think this character shows potential.

Quote from Xyskal

Hm......
I have no idea what is going in in your demo.

A guys goes behind Spemen but Spemen stabs him. He then chucks a halberd at the guys in front of him. Only it happens in 2 seconds so you can't see much until you watch it 10 times.

Quote from Person McPerson

A guys goes behind Spemen but Spemen stabs him. He then chucks a halberd at the guys in front of him. Only it happens in 2 seconds so you can't see much until you watch it 10 times.

Ooh. Now it makes more sense. Thank you for the explanation.

Quote from Xyskal

Ooh. Now it makes more sense. Thank you for the explanation.

here's more.
the left guy has two whips, the guy on right has a halberd, but it gets stolen by Spemen before he can use it. Also Spemen stabs both of them, first the left, than the right before chucking the halberd. And you're welcome btw.

I'll be looking forward into fighting you soon, I can't fight you now but if you may, add a hitlist I'll Battle you soon.

You shoulda worked on your demo more before releasing it. :L

Quote from Mr Michael

BAD DEMO,Average Story,and Great Age

dang dude
you could at least explain what's up
ok so ninja, your demo is a bit too fast and there is too much going on at one time for us to know what is happening. slow down your animations and make things more 'legible'
your story has poor grammar. i don't know what's up with all these new rhg demos looking like this.
your rhg is pretty underpowered, too

Quote from BlindEite

Nice character,
but I'd recommend you to practice on your movements

Yup, I second that.

Woah, u gotta improve

Quote from Pivot Boom

Woah, u gotta improve

At least suggest ways you can improve.
For example, SpeMen's spear is the same color as Spe (I'm calling him Spe from now on because I just to don't want to type out his full name.) and I think you should change it's color to make it more easily distinguish able from him.

Damn ya'll are mean.

Anyway, your demo should probably be a bit more fleshed out. As far as I can tell you only showed him using the spear. You need to make sure you show all of his abilities.

Quote from Unbounded

Damn ya'll are mean..

I wasn't trying to be Q_Q