X-Max & Max

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Nov 19, 2015 5:14 AM #1416949
i just draw and draw until i improved than the last time. this is a stick figures.....maybe the colour and shade had just been improved a bit.

but......the anatomy.......so, what do you think?

its quite sucks a bit tho.... :(

(sorry about the error english)

http://www.hyunsdojo.com/uploads/photos/27704d124dea0019_37facaac_f.png
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Nov 19, 2015 11:12 AM #1417019
I like the jagged pixel style you used. The color scheme looks great as well. There isn't much anatomy to cnc since they're sticks though. Good job!
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Nov 19, 2015 11:22 AM #1417022
They look really good!
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Nov 19, 2015 12:51 PM #1417027
Quote from Salt
I like the jagged pixel style you used. The color scheme looks great as well. There isn't much anatomy to cnc since they're sticks though. Good job!


Thanks salt, i will keep going! :)

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They look really good!


Thanks dude, i appracite it! :)
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Nov 19, 2015 4:09 PM #1417064
It's really good for somebody who says their drawing sucks. Why'd you say that?
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Nov 19, 2015 6:01 PM #1417087
You should watch your values. Some areas look metalic when it really shouldn't.
Edit: Maybe thats what you were going for. Also, your hatching choice inside the lower half of the coat kinda bugs me.
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Dec 3, 2015 11:34 AM #1420430
Quote from Tun3
You should watch your values. Some areas look metalic when it really shouldn't.
Edit: Maybe thats what you were going for. Also, your hatching choice inside the lower half of the coat kinda bugs me.


yup, still.
Btw thanks for the asking
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Dec 3, 2015 11:47 AM #1420435
I went through it again, and I noticed the shading on the right character's right knee seems to be weird. I mean, that leg is supposed to be turned side-ways, if I'm not wrong?
So shouldn't that little line be removed? It might also fix the shading problem I mentioned.
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Dec 4, 2015 12:24 AM #1420629
Quote from S.A.
I went through it again, and I noticed the shading on the right character's right knee seems to be weird. I mean, that leg is supposed to be turned side-ways, if I'm not wrong?
So shouldn't that little line be removed? It might also fix the shading problem I mentioned.


Now that you said it, it does look weird.
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Dec 4, 2015 1:40 AM #1420653
Quote from S.A.
I went through it again, and I noticed the shading on the right character's right knee seems to be weird. I mean, that leg is supposed to be turned side-ways, if I'm not wrong?
So shouldn't that little line be removed? It might also fix the shading problem I mentioned.


maybbe...