Mr Michael:http://sta.sh/010wihrcrgsr (NO SONG)
Lithos:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tUN_sVOM-Ek&feature=youtu.be(HAS SONG)

this is our battle


we take 1 weeks to make it

sorry for short


I THINK LITHOS WIN

he can buy his phone back it think...poor Mr.Michael



RIP
Mr Michael IPhone

i see No El better..but No El fedora TOO pixel

No El animation is 1 minute and great sound effect

Mr Michael He Has Brutal......BUT THE SHOOORRRRTTT ANIMATION..Should do more..but i see your affort

WOW

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i see No El better..but No El fedora TOO pixel

No El animation is 1 minute and great sound effect

Mr Michael He Has Brutal......BUT THE SHOOORRRRTTT ANIMATION..Should do more..but i see your affort

WOW

I'm really sorry, but I lol'd IRL at that post.

Oh, voted btw.

Mr. Michael, you've improved. I vote for you.

Alright. So, I watched both of these, and enjoyed them; and although I myself am not a good animator, I have some comments for both of you. No-El, your anim was smoother and a bit more cohesive between bits of fighting. It was also somewhat funny, but the comedy was a little forced. Now, Mr. Micheal, I watched your previous anim, you have improved a great amount, but the battle was somewhat jarring and sudden. Overall, I have given my vote to No-El. Sorry Mr. M. (I'm going to call you that from now on.

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Alright. So, I watched both of these, and enjoyed them; and although I myself am not a good animator, I have some comments for both of you. No-El, your anim was smoother and a bit more cohesive between bits of fighting. It was also somewhat funny, but the comedy was a little forced.

Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate it. I'll try to work on the comedy being a bit forced.

Voted No-El in the end. His animation felt much more cohesive than Michael's.

No-El:

-Cmon man, there's zero reason for the first 30 seconds of the video to be an intro. It just wastes the viewer's time, and weakens your animation as a whole.
-That said, I appreciated the actual bit leading up to the fight. The comedy, while not my thing, was still appreciated.
-Should probably have redrawn the hat instead of using a sprite for it, especially for the closeups.
-Could use a bit more easing between movements.

Mr. M:
-Give people a few seconds to actually read the text. I could barely get a glimpse before it was gone. The viewer needs time to process the information.
-It lacked easing between movements. This could have made all the difference.
-I actually appreciated you taking a stab at those angles. Keep it up!

Keep at it both of you. Looking forward to seeing how you progress.

Hey The Thread Close winner Lithos


GG lithos


thx for who vote me..i will vote u if u fight with someone :)

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Hey The Thread Close winner Lithos


GG lithos


thx for who vote me..i will vote u if u fight with someone :)

Isn't voting supposed to last a week?