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i kinda like it, even though it was made in about 5 minutes

c&c?

pretty good dude, but like blugil, i think the first jump is a little fast

i love the animation ,but FOR THE LOVE OF MARSHMELLOWS THE RED HURTED MY EYES :Cry:

Everything was too fast, in particular the first jump like the others said. Other than that, not bad.
The particles looked like they were going to be a smoke cloud type thing, but then you had them break up so they didn't look real.

@the animator-lol i just thought it looked kinda cool. i did the dark red backround just so i could see the smoke onion skin, but then i liked the whole thing in dark red

@everyone-k i get the first jump was to fast!! OMG!!!!

@ln3uq-how could i make the smoke better? cuz i suck at smoke

Maybe try filling it in, then taking slightly darker shades of that gray over it, like shadow and depth, thats what i do whenevr i have "magic" or effects and particles in my animations. do it with one base color then go over with others.

The smoke wasn't an object, it was just lines.

You started with smoke


but then you turned it into lines


it should still be smoke-like