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Dec 15, 2015 7:12 AM #1423036
Eye of a demon, heart of a man
Name: Dezi/Dnais
Nickname: Dez/Nais/Dazn
Age: Unknown
Abilities:
Demonic Eye
Has a corrupt left eye which contains a demon. This allows him to be many times faster than the average human. In the presence of light, will turn him into a demon with even more enhanced speed, strength and eyesight. Also grows wings, larger horns, scales and clawed fingers in this state. Able to take flight. The demon also grows tiny fangs and has wider lips.
The demon's sole mission is to destroy anything in it's way - it also feeds on human flesh.
Telepathy
the sound of a bell ringing can be heard before and after he speaks. If he focuses hard enough, he can tap into your thoughts.
Hand to hand combat
Usually waits for his opponent to attack before attacking, has fast reflexes.
His fighting style is a mix of Karate, Aikido and Jujutsu. e.g:
Aikido is where one uses joint locks and throws to turn an attacker's force into a defense against that force.
Jujutsu uses one's opponent's attack and turns it on the attacker. It uses grapples for disabling an armed(or armored) opponent.
Karate is attacking without weapons. One uses many of his body to attack, especially the limbs. It also uses vital point strikes
Weapons
Dual daggers with the words Iracundia and Lacrimosa engraved on either blade.

Weaknesses:

Demonic Eye
He has difficulty controlling himself in this state. He can still command his own movements and thoughts a little by wrapping whips around his arms - cutting his arms allows him better control over the demon.
Despite the enhancements it gives him, Dezi now is very sensitive to the dark, and his wings, arms and lower body are weak. He gets tired easily as his horns, although small, weigh him down.
His left eye needs to be completely cut off from light for the demon to be sealed. Staying too long in this state will either allow the demon to take complete control or cause Dezi to collapse.
Telepathy
He only ever taps into your thoughts once as it drains him when he does so. One needs to be in his line of sight for him to do any Telepathy on them.

In human state, Dezi isn't as effective against a far-ranged fighter.

Story:
No one really know's how he came about, not even Dezi himself. He simply awoke in the middle of a crater on earth. He only remembered his name and being - a human like creature which housed an ancient immortal demon. His true purpose and origin is yet unknown. By then, the demon was already lying deep within his eye.
It stayed asleep until Dezi reached his 16th year on earth. He found that whenever his left eye was in the presence of light, he could not control the impulse to destroy everything in his path. He was brought back to his human state when night came. Horrified and ashamed of his actions, Dezi hid in a cave for centuries, attempting to tame the demon lying inside of his eye. He lives on the streets, roaming the earth. Ostracized and feared by many for his looks, he was left quite alone. Till now, he searches for some sort of cure to destroy or remove the demon within him. His permanent home is currently the cave he had hid in.

Personality:
Dezi is actually a very sweet and calm person. He is a little awkward around people but is still friendly. However, he is generally a very serious no nonsense person as well as being extremely cautious around new people and surroundings. He likes to plan and analyze things before entering a battle. No one has ever heard him speak nor made verbal sounds except in their minds. It is not known if he can speak or not. He cares for most life on earth and normally wouldn't kill, which is one of his most greatest weakness.
He would be good at hiding his emotions, especially negative ones except that his glowing tattoos would give him away. He has a colder side which he puts on in fighting. He has no qualms about injuring another person if necessary.
Demon state:
The demon believes it fears nothing. He gets enraged more easily but still has that calm demeanor. He is confident and relishes the power he has. Whenever he is awakened, he takes in everything quickly and is quick to understand his situation. Neither human nor demon share memories but can have a leak over when both are awake. Meaning they can see things the other sees. Both fight for control over the body.

Appearance:
Dezi, despite housing a demon, isn't bulging with muscles or any of that sort. He has the body like that of an 18-year-old. He has long raven black hair that covers his left eye. He also has wrappings to cover his left eye. He has tattoos along his cheeks and one on his forehead. They flash/glow different colors when he speaks as well as to show his emotions. (Blue-Speaking Grey-neutral Red-Anger etc)
His left eye is silver whereas his right is blue. His skin is very pale. Has small but noticeable red horns on the sides of his head. Dezi wears dark colours such as a black shirt and belt. (Wears hoodie in public)
Two strips of leather with pieces of sharp bone are attached to his belt. These are used by Dezi not to attack but to control himself in the demonic state. Bandages wrap his arms, covering many scars made by the leather. Leather sheaths around both his legs for his daggers. He wears no shoes over his clawed feet
Demon state:
Has scales along the bridge of his nose, back of neck and shoulders. Wings slightly larger than Dezi sprout from the center of his back and his reddish horns enlarge from the sides of his head. Fingers turn into long claws. His lips stretch disgustingly far, reaching almost to his ears. Two small fangs can be seen sometimes.

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Dec 15, 2015 7:25 AM #1423038
OMG! This guy's demonic eye reminds me of my RHG Ignus! His right eye is marked with three red scars that show he's the vessel of a legendary demon (his name is Drayneus btw, but you can call him Dray...) who takes over his body at times of extreme need and anguish, giving him enhanced speed and intelligence...
Besides the coincidence, nice character... I'll probably challenge you soon...
Very soon................ ;D
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Dec 15, 2015 7:37 AM #1423044
Quote from IgnusBurns
OMG! This guy's demonic eye reminds me of my RHG Ignus! His right eye is marked with three red scars that show he's the vessel of a legendary demon (his name is Drayneus btw, but you can call him Dray...) who takes over his body at times of extreme need and anguish, giving him enhanced speed and intelligence...
Besides the coincidence, nice character... I'll probably challenge you soon...
Very soon................ ;D


Oh, really? I didn't mean it to sound like I took the idea off from you. Dezi is all mine and mine alone(I hope subconscious being in my head won't contradict me). ^_^
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Dec 15, 2015 3:03 PM #1423105
Yaaaaay demon...


Nice RHG
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Dec 15, 2015 3:20 PM #1423113
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Oh, really? I didn't mean it to sound like I took the idea off from you. Dezi is all mine and mine alone(I hope subconscious being in my head won't contradict me). ^_^


Nahhhh... I don't think you meant to do that, I just think it's a funny coincidence, again, cool RHG...
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Dec 15, 2015 5:04 PM #1423127
Wow, so AWESOME!!! I would love to battle against this one once I've made my wRHG!
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Dec 16, 2015 8:56 AM #1423251
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Yaaaaay demon...


Nice RHG

You don't sound to happy
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Dec 16, 2015 2:05 PM #1423268
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You don't sound to happy


Doesn't really matter what I think. It isn't your job to please me, or anybody for that matter. I'm just not a huge fan of demons is all.
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Dec 17, 2015 6:28 AM #1423419
hahahahahaha this is the biggest coincidence in history! Ignus just found his match! I will enjoy reading the battles, and btw add mine to your hitlist pls. I am about to be open for a battle.
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Dec 17, 2015 11:45 AM #1423456
I've added the points and hitlist section.
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Dec 18, 2015 9:44 PM #1423802
cool, let's get at it starting the 20th?
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Dec 19, 2015 2:56 AM #1423874
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cool, let's get at it starting the 20th?

With pleasure

EDIT
Well, the challenge has been called off sadly. Fortunately for you guys, that means I'm up again for a battle. Hopefully, I'll get to go against malice again, and soon.
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Jan 4, 2016 11:15 AM #1428292
UPDATE:
Color reference for his emotions
Demon's name: Dnais
Demon states in Personality and Appearance
Hand to Hand combat: Aikido, Jujutsu, Karate



Red: Demon related
Blue: Both demon and human
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Jan 4, 2016 12:56 PM #1428303
I believe that Kamiroo's reaction hints towards the fact that demons are very popular among new-comers, myself included: my first gladiator was a half demon chap.

Anyways the character is intriguing and simple, which are good feats. The whole "tattoo color" thing is interesting, but a bit complicated IMO. Nonetheless very interesting.

I am slightly confused about one thing: he might not be very effective in human form against ranged fighters, but I really can't see the advantages that he has during demon form. I suppose he uses his speed and flight to close the gap? But correct me if I'm wrong, he has no ranged attacks.

To conclude, welcome to the circuit and feel free to add me to the hitlist. I'd fancy a swing at your Dezi ;)
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Jan 4, 2016 5:09 PM #1428330
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I believe that Kamiroo's reaction hints towards the fact that demons are very popular among new-comers, myself included: my first gladiator was a half demon chap.


No joke Delor, half the characters I create have some kind of demonic background, my RHG, Ignus was born with the legendary Drayneus inside of him. XD
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