Words of the Heart

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Dec 16, 2015 2:10 AM #1423188
I want to share with you guys a collection of all the poems I have done so far in my life. If you click here, it will take you straight to Google Docs so you can view it.

Enjoy! :D

(P.S. feel free to ask me about the poems as for nearly every one of them, there is some kind of inspiration or story behind it that I think you guys might find interesting.)

Click here if the other link doesn't work (it goes to a comments-added version on Quotev.com)
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Dec 16, 2015 2:51 AM #1423191
jsyk... You might need to grant access to the doc for other people... Just saying...
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Dec 16, 2015 3:15 AM #1423196
There, I think I fixed it. I've also added an alternate link just in case. :)
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Dec 16, 2015 4:27 PM #1423291
Nice poems man! Very well thought of and emotional! I've never really appreciated poetry, but this totally caught my eye! :D
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Dec 16, 2015 10:17 PM #1423323
I'm really impressed by many of your poems, good job.^^ I probably couldn't write such poetry, at least in English. Aren't you a non native english speaker? Because if you are, it makes it even more impressive.

To be honest not every poem really got to me, but I did like the style of almost every of your works.

Some of them feel very personal, as if I had a little chest with your feelings in my hands. I can try to guess what's in there based on its form, but I'm missing the key to really know what's in there. But it still appears to me that I shouldn't have this chest since I don't really know you. (I hope this wasn't too weird...)

Anyway, my favourites are probably "Counsel For Grief" and "Elders".

What was your inspiration for "Elders", if I may ask?
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Dec 16, 2015 10:52 PM #1423327
Quote from roBEAT
I'm really impressed by many of your poems, good job.^^ I probably couldn't write such poetry, at least in English. Aren't you a non native english speaker? Because if you are, it makes it even more impressive.

To be honest not every poem really got to me, but I did like the style of almost every of your works.

Some of them feel very personal, as if I had a little chest with your feelings in my hands. I can try to guess what's in there based on its form, but I'm missing the key to really know what's in there. But it still appears to me that I shouldn't have this chest since I don't really know you. (I hope this wasn't too weird...)

Anyway, my favourites are probably "Counsel For Grief" and "Elders".

What was your inspiration for "Elders", if I may ask?


Well, first off thanks a lot! I like it when other people appreciate my poetry, I wouldn't write it if I couldn't share it.

Second of all, I get what you mean when you said that they feel very personal. A lot of these are personal to me and writing poetry is my way of sharing and figuring out my emotions. If what I wrote is strong enough that you could almost feel it yourself, it's working its magic! :D

As for my poem "Elders", I once read a poem that had a similar style and I also felt at the time that I wanted to show my appreciation for all that my grandparents had done for me to help become who I am today. So I whipped this out a few days after this and now I can finally share it with you guys.

Once again, thanks a lot! :)
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Dec 17, 2015 1:27 AM #1423360
WOW! Just... wow! These are amazing poems! Nice job!
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Jan 23, 2016 11:55 PM #1432729
Just read your poems, and love them! Esp Roses from Ashes. That is actually just totally awesome.

I have been writing poems from years, and I recently slacked off. You just made me want to get back into it.

Oh, and God Bless bud! Great to see another Christian poet!
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Jan 24, 2016 12:35 AM #1432736
Quote from Alphaeus
Just read your poems, and love them! Esp Roses from Ashes. That is actually just totally awesome.

I have been writing poems from years, and I recently slacked off. You just made me want to get back into it.

Oh, and God Bless bud! Great to see another Christian poet!


Great! I'm glad my own poems inspire others to make more of their own! :o