Alta

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Dec 27, 2015 4:04 AM #1425555
Name: Alta

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- Abilities:
Alta can summon fire with her hands and throw fire balls at others. also she can sneek around without anybody noticing and choke them

- Weaknesses:
Alta's weakness is ice, and when she uses her power too much, she gets weakened.

- About/Story: when Alta was 10, she was in a car crash, and a big truck full of toxic things got into her blood, and now she can make fire with her hands.

- Demo: http://kittenplays.deviantart.com/art/RHG-demo-580472995?ga_submit_new=10%253A1451186936
- Battles: None yet.

- Points: 0/0
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Dec 28, 2015 2:23 AM #1425709
For the abilities, instead of having it say "she can sneak around without anybody noticing" change it to she is very stealthy because that is kind of overpowered in my opinion.
And if toxic things got into her blood, wouldn't she be dead?
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Dec 28, 2015 4:25 PM #1425817
No, toxins in blood gives superpowers. But in real life, the only explanation is that the toxins activate/mix with a strange mutagen in the specific person's DNA, resulting in a strange ability to generate fire from body parts. But magic works as well.
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Dec 28, 2015 8:49 PM #1425840
u got accepted *HOORAY :D*good luck on future duels..
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Dec 28, 2015 9:02 PM #1425842
Quote from TheOrigin
For the abilities, instead of having it say "she can sneak around without anybody noticing" change it to she is very stealthy because that is kind of overpowered in my opinion.
And if toxic things got into her blood, wouldn't she be dead?

well, its not real life....
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Dec 28, 2015 10:04 PM #1425852
Your demo was like a Game and Watch... difficult to follow due to the choppiness.
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Dec 29, 2015 11:45 PM #1426175
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well, its not real life....

thats true