I think your demo is pretty nice, but the story confuses me and is kinda cliche. The part that confuses me is when he see's the green guy(?) and is aggressive...I don't really understand. Is Kiyan aggressive or was the guy he saw aggressive? That's the only thing I can really say. Other than that I'd say this page is pretty nice.

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I think your demo is pretty nice, but the story confuses me and is kinda cliche. The part that confuses me is when he see's the green guy(?) and is aggressive...I don't really understand. Is Kiyan aggressive or was the guy he saw aggressive? That's the only thing I can really say. Other than that I'd say this page is pretty nice.

I'm pretty sure that he green guy was the aggressive one.

And does starburst stream have any abilities? Why give it a cool name if it's just a sword?

Good demo, but your guy looks exactly like Boltz.

Yep the green guy is the aggressive one.

its galactic

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its galactic

What's a galactic?

its like a sort of light saber shiz

kiyan you need to get a mod to approve your post, it went down
(Until you get 20 posts on your account, you have to do this any time you post with links or edit a post with links)

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I can't see anything here, is it my fault or what?

It's because the thread still needs to be approved because it was edited.