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PARADOX Chapter 1 (Oxobs Resolve)
FAN FICTION

The scene starts as Shura stands in a loney dessert area but something is wrong His skin is not its normal Gray...its dark and there are some White Marks on His Face plus his Right arm..its Missing pure Rage Radiates from him and There Behind Him appers Oxob with a Brown Back pack "SHURAAA!!!"Oxob Yells out"You killed Camila and Gilded Shrura turns to face Oxob, still saying nothing Shura looks intently at Oxob OXob begins to rememember How he watched from the Organaisations screen as Camila and Gilded guy teamed up to Tame shura whose Darker side had taken Control of Him he Remembers what an awsome team they made how After a long Battle it seemed Shura was becoming Stronger and Stronger HE Remember how Gilded Guy Gave his all and Cut off shura's Arm..But enough Oxob had had enough His eyes Begin Glow as electricity forms a Scarf,SHura suddenly dissapears from Oxob's Sight Only to appear behind Oxob as SHura throws a punch at oxob Oxob Blocks shura's Ataack" Dont forget"says oxob..."we were on the same Team" we Trained together all the Time SHura smile's Yess we were Shura Jumps Back As OXob does the same "fine"says Shura....."entertain me"...Oxob calms Down and Whispers to Himself "shura..camila Belived there was a Part of your humanity left i thought so too But Now.....Im Goin to Destroy You Completely" Oxob and Shura Charge at each other as a Deadly Battle Begins a mysterious Figure Watches From the Distance Watches he Has some sort of Constillation tatoo on his Face..."i Failed...i...Failed again....I Couldnt Fix The Timeline.....Not again.


End of Chapter 1
So this is my Fan Fic i Plan on including every stick figure i can and illd like to add yours too...Just a heads up he may Die lol illd Like Suggestions and if someone has some cool ideas for the Show Paradox let me know

Please work on your grammar. It makes it hard to read.

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PARADOX Chapter 1 (Oxobs Resolve)
FAN FICTION

The scene starts as Shura stands in a loney dessert area but something is wrong His skin is not its normal Gray...its dark and there are some White Marks on His Face plus his Right arm..its Missing pure Rage Radiates from him and There Behind Him appers Oxob with a Brown Back pack "SHURAAA!!!"Oxob Yells out"You killed Camila and Gilded Shrura turns to face Oxob, still saying nothing Shura looks intently at Oxob OXob begins to rememember How he watched from the Organaisations screen as Camila and Gilded guy teamed up to Tame shura whose Darker side had taken Control of Him he Remembers what an awsome team they made how After a long Battle it seemed Shura was becoming Stronger and Stronger HE Remember how Gilded Guy Gave his all and Cut off shura's Arm..But enough Oxob had had enough His eyes Begin Glow as electricity forms a Scarf,SHura suddenly dissapears from Oxob's Sight Only to appear behind Oxob as SHura throws a punch at oxob Oxob Blocks shura's Ataack" Dont forget"says oxob..."we were on the same Team" we Trained together all the Time SHura smile's Yess we were Shura Jumps Back As OXob does the same "fine"says Shura....."entertain me"...Oxob calms Down and Whispers to Himself "shura..camila Belived there was a Part of your humanity left i thought so too But Now.....Im Goin to Destroy You Completely" Oxob and Shura Charge at each other as a Deadly Battle Begins a mysterious Figure Watches From the Distance Watches he Has some sort of Constillation tatoo on his Face..."i Failed...i...Failed again....I Couldnt Fix The Timeline.....Not again.


End of Chapter 1
So this is my Fan Fic i Plan on including every stick figure i can and illd like to add yours too...Just a heads up he may Die lol illd Like Suggestions and if someone has some cool ideas for the Show Paradox let me know

I have no idea what happened. If you could use auto-correct, the clutter would mostly go away.
Also, why? Beware of run-on sentences. But why is he not himself? Why is he in a lonely desert area?
I hope you elaborate on these.

I see thank you ill remember that if I write another one

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I see thank you ill remember that if I write another one

I would very much enjoy reading another story in this series! Despite being attached to Stickpage, we don't see many people like Oxob and Shura in stories very often, which is sad to me. You may be new to writing and English in general, but the story you are building has the makings of a time-traveling epic; one of my favorites!

As you mentioned the possibility of adding other people's characters in the story, I would be happy to volunteer my character, Dante, as someone looking to fix the timeline. Also, I will be here to help with grammar, spelling, and punctuation in your stories should you decide to continue. Know that while the writing process tells you to do the "publishing" last, you must remember in order to "revise" and "edit", you may need help from others- regardless of how familiar or unfamiliar you are with the English language. The Writer's Lounge is here for you!

Always remember: if you need help with writing, you are free to ask!

ithanks chromium im a terrible writer while im improving at animation at a fast pace so ill just animate this should I notify you when im done

You are free to notify whomever you need, whenever you need! I wish you well!

ill take you up on this offer I just wrote something new its called god's for hire it needs you..i posted it yesterday