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Mar 19, 2016 7:55 AM #1442683
Creepin Bro
Color: #009900
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Clan: The Compound


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Abilities
Explosive Body
Can charge and detonate explosions ANYWHERE on his body, an instant explosion is fairly harmless, but still has some decent knockback, for mobility, and keeping a distance

Flaming Blood
In his body, he stores his flame. Literally.
This flame can come from his body through the skin at a good rate, however, comes out fastest and with the most velocity out of any hole in his body namely mouth and nose, but can include wounds.
CBro does not use his fire like a pyrokinetic would, but more like a water bender would with water. He can control its vectors, as well as temperature, and brightness (to an extent), and can make the fire solid, and touchable. He can use his fire's versatility for defending from attacks and sending semi-long range blows of his own, but mainly for utility, such as correcting himself in the air, giving himself and his attacks extra velocity, and even picking things up from a distance.
The flame must be connected to his body, even via the smallest touch, for him to manipulate it (it keeps velocity and tempurature after released)
Unfortunately, fire isn't meant to be a solid object and shatters after 1 or 2 solid blows, it's also easy to cut.
(just FYI, this isn't actually his blood, it's just called Flaming Blood)

Heat Resistance
Impervious to heat and explosives (explosives can still knock him back, but much less, and they don't hurt at all unless they have/create shrapnel)
This resistance is 100%, heat of any kind doesn't hurt him, at all.

Physical Strengths
Extremely agile and much faster than an average human, but nothing super special by RHG standards.

He is fairly strong when it comes to grip, throws, lifting things, carrying things, etc.

Brains+Brawn
CBro is a genius, simple as that.
And his genius is not lessened by high-stress situations, he is a master at planning his attacks in a split second, and reading his enemy just as fast.


Weaknesses

Explosives
His explosives must be charged to be very effective, and they can be canceled via hitting the point they are charging on.

Fire
His fire, due to it being stored in him, is limited. He can only have a certain amount of it out of his body at once, however, when his fire dissipates, it doesn't just go out like regular fire would, instead, it breaks into particles not visible to the human eye and returns to his body, ready for use again.

While his fire can be used in contact with water, and it doesn't hurt CBro physically, it causes immense pain all over his body.

Physical attributes
While he is most certainly not weak nor is he unable to take a good hit, he's no tank either.

He may be pretty fast, and he is really agile/acrobatic/parkour skilled/ whatever you want to call it, he does not have super speed.


Story_longish (Click to Show)



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Personality (Click to Show)



Fighting Style (Click to Show)



Moves (Click to Show)



Fan Art (Click to Show)



Demos

Demo 1 (it sucks sooooooooo bad, and it's really old, I need to update it, badly. Watch my battle with Ortim/Force, for something still less then my current skill, but better)

http://sta.sh/01z075stjo63


Battles

Vs Ortimh - Force Lost :(
Vs ACFH - Sol Lost via forfeit

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Points

WIN/LOSE
0/2


Hit List
frNME-Burst
Ortimh-Force(I got Forced to the ground)
apielang - Elang
Boltz - Blast
Xyskal - Xal & Mr. Fluffykins
Trashh - Tacticus

Availability
Not available, getting gud
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Mar 19, 2016 12:49 PM #1442701
So this is your RHG, huh? Nice. My only concern is your demo. It needs to be improved. Good luck with future battles!
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Mar 19, 2016 12:58 PM #1442703
This good. The concept is executed nicely, and he doesn't seem broken. But I do have one problem.
What is the diffrence between "short term strength" and "long term strength"
If he has strong grabs and such, why does that power not transfer over to his punches and kicks.

Also, I think you should stop posting gifs, as the quality for them is horrible. Just try using the .swf file format instead.
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Mar 19, 2016 3:01 PM #1442718
Nice RHG, better than I expected.

I'm on your hitlist? I'm honored.
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Mar 19, 2016 7:02 PM #1442755
I want to see RIGHT of Companionship next. The others seem too overused.
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Mar 19, 2016 7:08 PM #1442757
Quote from Conflate.
Nice RHG, better than I expected.

I'm on your hitlist? I'm honored.


What? you think I'd make a bad RHG? (so did I) thanks though he will get better though (hopefully I've thought out the RIGHTs well enough so that he is not broken)

i figured out how to multi quote! But i think i still double posted, crap
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Mar 19, 2016 7:30 PM #1442760
Quote from Xyskal
This good. The concept is executed nicely, and he doesn't seem broken. But I do have one problem.
What is the diffrence between "short term strength" and "long term strength"
If he has strong grabs and such, why does that power not transfer over to his punches and kicks.

Also, I think you should stop posting gifs, as the quality for them is horrible. Just try using the .swf file format instead.

A punch is a fast really strong burst of energy to propel your fist, but, say your lifting something, that requires less energy at once but it's over an extended period of time (basically i think i found a really dumb way of saying he has good stamina, should i go change that in the rhg page?
And about the swf thing I'll do that if i find out how (can swf's be but on image shack?)<- no, they cant, so, how do i use em?
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So this is your RHG, huh? Nice. My only concern is your demo. It needs to be improved. Good luck with future battles!

Literally my first ever finished animation, so it kinda sucks, a lot, BUT im workin on gettin better
(it was actually just ganna be animation practice but i thought, "well i wanna make an rhg, and i need a demo soooo... why not?")
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Mar 19, 2016 10:27 PM #1442779
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A punch is a fast really strong burst of energy to propel your fist, but, say your lifting something, that requires less energy at once but it's over an extended period of time (basically i think i found a really dumb way of saying he has good stamina, should i go change that in the rhg page?


So you mean that he has lots of energy, but he can burn through it all quickly?

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And about the swf thing I'll do that if i find out how (can swf's be but on image shack?)<- no, they cant, so, how do i use em?

You can upload them to this website: http://sta.sh/
It allows you to directly upload .swfs into the website, and creates a private page that only you have access to. You can then get the direct link to the .swf, and use this code:
[swf'=Direct Link]Height=400 Width=550['/swf] without the ' and use that to directly display your animations. Unless you want to only use imageshack.

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Literally my first ever finished animation, so it kinda sucks, a lot, BUT im workin on gettin better
(it was actually just ganna be animation practice but i thought, "well i wanna make an rhg, and i need a demo soooo... why not?")

In the demo, your animation was....robotic. There was never any buildup into the movements, and living things don't move that way. They always start slowly and then pick up speed over time, and that is never done in your animation. Maybe try adding 3 or so frames of slow movement, and then have it gradually pick up speed.
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Mar 19, 2016 10:41 PM #1442782
Thanks i'll take that all into consideration

EDIT: Just updated post to use stash instead of gifs

Also Xyskal, im saying he doesnt burn though stamina (not energy) fast so he's able to lift REALLY heavy things with ease but he cant put much power in a punch with out explosives
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Mar 20, 2016 11:54 AM #1442890
Started my first battle, wish me luck

My Opponent: Ortimh-Force
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Mar 20, 2016 2:54 PM #1442904
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Started my first battle, wish me luck

My Opponent: Ortimh-Force


Somehow I expected that to happen.
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Mar 21, 2016 9:21 PM #1443098
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I want to see RIGHT of Companionship next. The others seem too overused.


I might have to do right of elements first, cause I forgot to mention that some RITEs require others first
(I intend on drawing a skill tree and updating it when he unlocks stuff)
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Mar 21, 2016 10:52 PM #1443103
Can he regenerate his exploded body parts?
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Mar 21, 2016 11:32 PM #1443105
Well, the concept of your caracter is pretty good, and considering that the demo is one of your first animations is not that bad too, you still need to work on the way the stick figures moves though, even if the animation is easy to understand the movements are not that fluid and they look sligthly forced. Focus on improving that and you'll see the diference. ^^
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Mar 22, 2016 12:08 AM #1443118
Quote from Narziur
Well, the concept of your caracter is pretty good, and considering that the demo is one of your first animations is not that bad too, you still need to work on the way the stick figures moves though, even if the animation is easy to understand the movements are not that fluid and they look sligthly forced. Focus on improving that and you'll see the diference. ^^


I started using line tool, god that helps

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Can he regenerate his exploded body parts?


As one of his abilities he is immune to heat and explosions, so his body parts don't get damaged when they blow up



btw just askin, does Umbrella still fight? I know FLLFFL is gone.
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