you have nice stuff here and ideas however you don't seem to understand how to ease your movements. your spacing isn't bad but can use some work and you seem unable to capture or grasp how certain reacting would look. you made the red guy grab his hand after getting cut off which is fine but he didn't scream or put it near his body to show pain usually when showing struggling or pain you need to make shaky small movements that are a little intterruption in how he's moving but thats after you master the basics. for now focus on smoothing out your movements cause as of right now they are good in concept and your poses aren't that bad so keep up the good work I look forward to seeing what you do in the future.
and umm... well this place is dead and well no one seems to remember or know me so umm can i get courtesy. I've kinda been completely overlooked in the past 2 years it seems only guys form 4 years ago remember me lol