Alright, just gotta check in with Hunter to see if he got his part done.
If so, then we should be done with only a few minor complications and if not then I'll probably end up asking Chrome to wrap up his section or I'll finish it myself.
Needless to say, this was a drawn out ordeal, but I'm positive things will improve as I get more used to coordinating stuff like this. There should be some updates or something coming soon, so stay posted if you care ;o
Now if you excuse me, I'm going to sleep =_=
Sanctuary
Started by: Kamiroo Wolf | Replies: 230 | Views: 28,158
Sep 11, 2016 6:38 AM #1460358
Sep 11, 2016 7:31 AM #1460365
Just give him like circe four more days, and if he doesn't update us, drop him. I know that hunter was interested and wanted to work in on this, but the actual time this has taken is ridiculous.
Sep 11, 2016 2:22 PM #1460378
Quote from deviJust give him like circe four more days, and if he doesn't update us, drop him. I know that hunter was interested and wanted to work in on this, but the actual time this has taken is ridiculous.
I completely agree with you there, and it's mostly the fault of my leniency with due dates. I'll give him a bit longer(might as well at this point), but after that I fully intend to skip over 'em and wrap it up as mentioned above.
Sep 11, 2016 3:20 PM #1460381
I would be more than happy to continue on with my part / collaborate with others to make a more satisfying / complete ending, though I will say that I did what I could to write in a way that what have currently... is, or can be, an ending. A cliffhanger ending maybe, but it's still an ending and we can move forward with it. All that's ultimately "missing" from the story right now is Zackeroar, and we're free to either edit him into things, or leave him out of it and just touch the story up a bit so it's ready to post on Stickpage.
As for the writing side, I'm not sure how many of us ended up sending in parts- I know me, Devi, and Kamiroo all did, which is good, and also that XDHunterNest didn't / isn't currently, and that shadowmirror may or may not have. All things considered, this... could've gone worse, with it being our first collab, us in different time zones, and us having never really established our clan community as the sort of hyperactive-yet-masterful project-producing band of baboons that clans like Night Creatures, the Coils of Nehushtan, and others like to think they and their clanmates are all of the time. I think that everyone who did write learned from it and will continue to as we finalize this, and my hope is that those who didn't write will still have their wish and legacies respected within whatever story we finally go forward with, and that their renewed passion and guidance will come together to form the hand that guides us all from here onto later, greater things.
We should discuss things in more detail as Hunter's time ticks down, either on the thread if we're fine with discussing spoilers (such as how Light valiantly braves a storm of ketchuped weiners) or away... somewhere, if we wanted to keep the details a secret for some reason- which we don't, probably. If anyone has questions regarding my ending and how to bring things back (from where I left it) to where we want them for the future, I will happily answer them here or elsewhere, and am keeping myself open to questions of all sorts as well.
Do I like Rhubarb? Surprisingly yes.
As for the writing side, I'm not sure how many of us ended up sending in parts- I know me, Devi, and Kamiroo all did, which is good, and also that XDHunterNest didn't / isn't currently, and that shadowmirror may or may not have. All things considered, this... could've gone worse, with it being our first collab, us in different time zones, and us having never really established our clan community as the sort of hyperactive-yet-masterful project-producing band of baboons that clans like Night Creatures, the Coils of Nehushtan, and others like to think they and their clanmates are all of the time. I think that everyone who did write learned from it and will continue to as we finalize this, and my hope is that those who didn't write will still have their wish and legacies respected within whatever story we finally go forward with, and that their renewed passion and guidance will come together to form the hand that guides us all from here onto later, greater things.
We should discuss things in more detail as Hunter's time ticks down, either on the thread if we're fine with discussing spoilers (such as how Light valiantly braves a storm of ketchuped weiners) or away... somewhere, if we wanted to keep the details a secret for some reason- which we don't, probably. If anyone has questions regarding my ending and how to bring things back (from where I left it) to where we want them for the future, I will happily answer them here or elsewhere, and am keeping myself open to questions of all sorts as well.
Do I like Rhubarb? Surprisingly yes.
Sep 15, 2016 2:06 AM #1460673
Quote from Chromium7
Do I like Rhubarb? Surprisingly yes.
Wonderful news. In addition to that news, Hunter has finished his story :D Now all that's left is to add it to what we already have and wrap up where Chrome left off. I'll PM him after I post here to check if he's still up for it, but if not I'll wrap it up myself.
Also, we posting this bad boy here or do you special campers wanna put it in a separate thread?
Sep 15, 2016 9:52 AM #1460689
@Kamiroo:
Still up for it! But I'm not seeing Hunter's story on the Gdoc- you said in the PM that it was going in the beginning portion? I haven't heard anything from him directly is all.
I would say post it as a separate thread, then put a link to the new thread on the front page of the clan.
@XDHunterNest:
Quote from Kamiroo WolfWonderful news. In addition to that news, Hunter has finished his story :D Now all that's left is to add it to what we already have and wrap up where Chrome left off. I'll PM him after I post here to check if he's still up for it, but if not I'll wrap it up myself.
Still up for it! But I'm not seeing Hunter's story on the Gdoc- you said in the PM that it was going in the beginning portion? I haven't heard anything from him directly is all.
Quote from Kamiroo WolfAlso, we posting this bad boy here or do you special campers wanna put it in a separate thread?
I would say post it as a separate thread, then put a link to the new thread on the front page of the clan.
@XDHunterNest:
Bad prawn? :rolleyes:
Sep 15, 2016 7:45 PM #1460742
ACR Target: Soylent Greene (Click to Show)
Mission Complete.
Weapon Delivered.
Payment Expected in Full.
Sep 16, 2016 12:37 AM #1460769
Quote from AzureACR Target: Soylent Greene (Click to Show)
Mission Complete.
Weapon Delivered.
Payment Expected in Full.
Very nicely done! Sencarn would be more than happy to keep up his end of the deal for such a clean extraction.
Quote from Chromium7@Kamiroo:
Still up for it! But I'm not seeing Hunter's story on the Gdoc- you said in the PM that it was going in the beginning portion? I haven't heard anything from him directly is all.
I would say post it as a separate thread, then put a link to the new thread on the front page of the clan.
@XDHunterNest:
Bad prawn? :rolleyes:
Aye, I just haven't added it to the doc yet x3 I'll go ahead and get on that.
Sep 16, 2016 8:42 AM #1460829
Quote from AzureACR Target: Soylent Greene (Click to Show)
Mission Complete.
Weapon Delivered.
Payment Expected in Full.
Damn. Did we just get played? I know the Coils would probably want Dante looking into this. Sure hope that bow (Soylent?) was worth the trouble, and that this Bridget character doesn't get into (or cause) too much suffering from here on. All in all though, this was a great story and I'm happy to see the concept of ACRs reaching outward to writers unaffiliated with the core membership of Sanctuary, and eager to see the repercussions of these contracts play out in whatever stories are to come.
Quote from Kamiroo WolfAye, I just haven't added it to the doc yet x3 I'll go ahead and get on that.
Alright, I'm seeing it! Read through it real quick, liking it so far. It's a pretty great opening, and I think my favorite part has to be Zackeroar literally saying "Fuck you." to the goddess of marriage. I've been fixing and making note of typos and little things I'm seeing as I go, it hasn't been anything too major, and anyone with access to the doc can clearly see what was changed. Pleasantly surprised by XDHunterNest's piece so far, and excited to see this collab on its way to release! I'm going to continue with small edits, additions, notations, etc for a bit, then get back to extending further the now-somewhat-extended ending to where the collab I... guess... spans through the night? Zackeroar could potentially also make a second appearance.
Also, I changed the font for the title to comic sans. I hope this is acceptable.
Sep 16, 2016 1:38 PM #1460850
Quote from Chromium7Damn. Did we just get played? I know the Coils would probably want Dante looking into this. Sure hope that bow (Soylent?) was worth the trouble, and that this Bridget character doesn't get into (or cause) too much suffering from here on. All in all though, this was a great story and I'm happy to see the concept of ACRs reaching outward to writers unaffiliated with the core membership of Sanctuary, and eager to see the repercussions of these contracts play out in whatever stories are to come.
Alright, I'm seeing it! Read through it real quick, liking it so far. It's a pretty great opening, and I think my favorite part has to be Zackeroar literally saying "Fuck you." to the goddess of marriage. I've been fixing and making note of typos and little things I'm seeing as I go, it hasn't been anything too major, and anyone with access to the doc can clearly see what was changed. Pleasantly surprised by XDHunterNest's piece so far, and excited to see this collab on its way to release! I'm going to continue with small edits, additions, notations, etc for a bit, then get back to extending further the now-somewhat-extended ending to where the collab I... guess... spans through the night? Zackeroar could potentially also make a second appearance.
Also, I changed the font for the title to comic sans. I hope this is acceptable.
Might wanna send Hunter those changes via pm. Don't think he was able to view the doc as he sent his submission through private message.
Hehe. Every kill, capture, and recruit shall serve their purpose
Sep 18, 2016 9:40 AM #1460995
Quote from Chromium7Also, I changed the font for the title to comic sans. I hope this is acceptable.
Kill urself
Sep 19, 2016 6:53 PM #1461090
Alright, sorted out some grammar things. Now here's the plan for the ending. I will push the ending to continue... through the night, and anyone who wants to help with that is free to, and Zackeroar may make a second appearance. Following this, devi will be at liberty to end the story with Light retrieving his "prize" the following day. Then we make sure other things I didn't fool with earlier like the change in tenses are all taken care of, then we can go ahead and post this.
And we have to keep the title in comic sans. It's important to me.
And we have to keep the title in comic sans. It's important to me.
Sep 19, 2016 7:36 PM #1461097
Quote from Chromium7Alright, sorted out some grammar things. Now here's the plan for the ending. I will push the ending to continue... through the night, and anyone who wants to help with that is free to, and Zackeroar may make a second appearance. Following this, devi will be at liberty to end the story with Light retrieving his "prize" the following day. Then we make sure other things I didn't fool with earlier like the change in tenses are all taken care of, then we can go ahead and post this.
And we have to keep the title in comic sans. It's important to me.
*thumbs up* =u=
As long as this doesn't spill into October, I have no issues.
Sep 19, 2016 11:59 PM #1461133
Double post but it comes bearing updates!
-Armory section added between Location and Members section!
-BMICS added to Armory section!
-Bridget's Bow added to Armory section!
-Bridget Greene added to ACR Targets list.
-Armory section added between Location and Members section!
-BMICS added to Armory section!
-Bridget's Bow added to Armory section!
-Bridget Greene added to ACR Targets list.
Sep 20, 2016 12:26 AM #1461140
If you post a story with a title in Comic Sans, I will burn Sanctuary to the ground
Also, I may need a target, just gotta figure out with who
Also, I may need a target, just gotta figure out with who