1 vs. ALL 1st and 2nd part.

Started by: Nyatako_Chan | Replies: 8 | Views: 891

Nyatako_Chan

Posts: 6
Joined: Jun 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 21, 2016 8:10 PM #1451741
M9 F1rs Animation
Creepin_Bro
2

Posts: 757
Joined: Mar 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 21, 2016 8:48 PM #1451748
alrighty, gatta tell ya, choppy af
he kinda teleports his limbs to hit people instead of swinging them and it looked more like a slide show than an animation
the part that did look good is when he lost balance and swung his arms in circles, the arms in that part looked good
also, sound effects were either miss timed or poorly chosen
the stock explosion look like out of place, but I can let that slide since you probably cant make your own yet
also, I just dont get why a ladder came out of the ground

in the second anim, not much to critizise on, since the guns didnt move much, how ever you did time the sound effects well, which is nice
also, the blood and blur effects were great (that is, if you made them)
however the sword and the small amount of character movement there was, was choppy like the first animation

my suggestions are to:
One. change to animating in 24 frames per second or around that area, as thats a commonly used frame rate, and for a good reason
Two. Make sure the sticks move MUCH, MUCH, less per frame, to make it smooth
Three. start learning to make effects, i know its hard af, I'm actually really bad with them, but its worth it, as the quality of your anims will go up with effects
Nyatako_Chan

Posts: 6
Joined: Jun 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 10:19 AM #1451824
Very Thanks 4 your suggestions
Creepin_Bro
2

Posts: 757
Joined: Mar 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 5:38 PM #1451848
No Problem
Nyatako_Chan

Posts: 6
Joined: Jun 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 5:53 PM #1451850
m8 how i cAn MaK3 0r jo1n GroUp
Creepin_Bro
2

Posts: 757
Joined: Mar 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 5:57 PM #1451852
what do you mean by group?
Nyatako_Chan

Posts: 6
Joined: Jun 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 6:55 PM #1451859
Group it's like your "ON THE TIP COLLAB"
Creepin_Bro
2

Posts: 757
Joined: Mar 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 6:58 PM #1451861
thats not a group, i just put that in my signature to promote the On The top Collab
which is a Collaborative Animation
Nyatako_Chan

Posts: 6
Joined: Jun 2016
Rep: 10

View Profile
Jun 22, 2016 7:00 PM #1451862
oh sorry