Practice - 2

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Jun 29, 2016 4:11 AM #1452836
https://youtu.be/ZxSypzmFTdc
CnC please~
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Practice - 1 : https://youtu.be/Mmro2eU_-hw
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Jun 30, 2016 12:43 PM #1453009
I don't like your effects, and your movements are rather sloppy. Instead of doing a couple seconds each and compiling them, you should do a longer continuous animation with at least two figures to challenge your choreography and creativity.
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Jun 30, 2016 12:47 PM #1453011
These are incomplete tests and not practices.

What are you practicing here anyway? Which aspect of the fundamentals of animation are you focusing on?
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Jul 1, 2016 3:08 AM #1453090
Quote from Arch-Angel
I don't like your effects, and your movements are rather sloppy. Instead of doing a couple seconds each and compiling them, you should do a longer continuous animation with at least two figures to challenge your choreography and creativity.


Quote from Zero
These are incomplete tests and not practices.

What are you practicing here anyway? Which aspect of the fundamentals of animation are you focusing on?


Alright, but yea some part of the animation is a practice for me (especially the movement, blood, combo, and etc.) but I didn't finish them so its not looks like a practice animation (I should name that Unrusting or whatever it is). :T you both were right. I'll do better next time. Thx a lot~