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Next time, I would say you put up a post announcing your little rework, do it on the day you post the edits and not four days after or whatever.
Also, one thing that is looked down upon on characters is a lack of originality and you just went and took the duo idea because you saw Alphaeus do it. :P
However, I won't condemn you yet, I want to critique this shit yet again since you specifically asked for my opinion (really, it warms my heart.)

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Sin Tally I: "She is wearing her Inert Cipher outfit"
Now, you go on to explain the gloves and boots, but I still don't know what's around her torso and her leggings. Like, it's an improvement from the previous one but I still have to go other places to know what she's wearing. Dammit, I demand my laziness be sated.

Sin Tally II: The Personality section in general.
It doesn't look like you changed this? I dunno, I didn't notice a huge difference. Regardless, your descriptions seem to have little do with each other and seems very disorganized as a whole. You just seem to be fangirling over your own character :P
"and is certifiably insane"
You also do nothing to describe this. The rest of the page just seems to be about a self-righteous, egotistical, prick that stands on morality as an excuse or something.

Sin Tally III: the beginning of the shitfest, as you dubbed it.
So, you seem to be getting close to something workable. Your section on her "cheating" is... not enough. Like, saying she won't do something ever is too paladin-like to be real. You could easily say she is limited by her mortal body and can't access her full powers unless she goes back to her original body or something like that. Otherwise it just feels too perfect to me. It's too much on that "Lawful" side of the alignment spectrum for it to really fit her personality.

Sin Tally IV: "Qi is often referred to as “chi, qui, ki,” or “the soul”" and "Alex can drain as much or a little of it as she wants in an instant" and "If the victim is sentient, they must... be touching"
So... she can take my soul in an instant via touch? I don't know if you know this or not, but that along with the ability to melt armor and you have someone that you can only safely defeat with repeated use of long-range weaponry.

Sin Tally V: "Alexandra allows herself to meddle with it only slightly in order to maintain a fair fight." and "she may try and attack, and the attack is swept away in a moment of nonexistence"
Again, this is something that wouldn't need to be so delicately explained or so contradictory if she wasn't omnipotent. If she has perfect control and only "allows herself" to use so much, why would she throw an attack and throw herself into non-existence? If she can control it, that shouldn't happen.
So, I thus go back to the original idea that she is limiting herself in a mortal body and doesn't have access to her omnipotence in that form or something. But, ya know, whatever.

Sin Tally VI: I still don't like the Eye of Terror. You have the cop-out of strong will, but not everybody could actually say their character has that. I think it'd be better to be removed entirely, but that's just my opinion.

Anything I would have to say after that would be repetitive so, I'm done.

About you not being likable, I think it's more that you're new and you're acting like it. There is this jaded view from longer-term members regarding newer people, they tend to leave and there presence tends to be uneventful or frustrating until that point. Or maybe that's just my view *shrug*

I do appreciate the fact you actually listened to CnC even if you didn't really budge that much. Most people in your shoes would leave in a foul mood.

Quote from 969_DoomsDruid_969

II- She is not really a prick. She is a believer in "do whatever the fuck you want" (kinda similar to Manny) whereas Jacques is a strong believer in the system (kinda similar to the Doctor). She just also wants to save humanity, and sentient life in general, but with her own ideals. Jacques is the same. The insanity thing is her "I'm happy all the time, unless you really piss me off. Then I will beat the shit out of you mercilessly all the time! YAAAAAAAAAAAAY!" thing.

VI- Every character in wRHG has either a strong will or a sharp wit (determined or clever.) EVERY ONE. So I think I am justified there.

Quote from 969_DoomsDruid_969

I can't fight the Handyman. I already knew he was a thing. I've been watching long before I made Alex (10/10 not a stalker)