Something I'm working on.

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Jul 23, 2016 5:43 PM #1455343
http://www.fastswf.com/QKkm_PM
CnC on this, going to finish it, just want to make sure it will be the best it can be with your opinions.
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Jul 24, 2016 11:09 PM #1455444
let me ask you, do you think this is the best you can do? are you 100% satisfied with this?

what flaws do you notice, if any? I see a few, nothing drastic but there's little things that can be improved. I'll elaborate but first I'm curious to know what you think you can improve upon here
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Jul 24, 2016 11:12 PM #1455445
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let me ask you, do you think this is the best you can do? are you 100% satisfied with this?

what flaws do you notice, if any? I see a few, nothing drastic but there's little things that can be improved. I'll elaborate but first I'm curious to know what you think you can improve upon here


The ending for sure,
http://www.fastswf.com/B2JgPgo
I actually changed it, and added a lot on, and I think I can improve, this is all rustbreaking so every animation I make I usually get a lot better since I already used to animate all the time and had a lot more skill, the CnC helps a tooon though.
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Jul 28, 2016 7:28 AM #1455836
It's pretty good. The red stick's reaction for the blue stick's first punch is a bit unrealistic since the punch does not seem very powerful. The jump and punch that you added has no anticipation. He basically flies off the ground without crouching a bit first, which looks strange.
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Jul 28, 2016 7:31 AM #1455837
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It's pretty good. The red stick's reaction for the blue stick's first punch is a bit unrealistic since the punch does not seem very powerful. The jump and punch that you added has no anticipation. He basically flies off the ground without crouching a bit first, which looks strange.


Yea I totally dumped that animation, it looks like crap to me, http://www.fastswf.com/6e_y95k I just made this kool stuff, I would post the rest of my animations on here but Stickpage = Ghosttown now so. HyunsDojo is the new place or whatever.
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Jul 28, 2016 7:38 AM #1455840
Yeah, it is a bit slow here.
Nice animation, very funny. The uppercut is bit hard to read. The last reaction is kind of funny, but it also seems like you probably did not want to animate anymore. You should try to make something longer and complete it, even if it doesn't look the greatest.
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Jul 28, 2016 7:40 AM #1455841
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Yeah, it is a bit slow here.
Nice animation, very funny. The uppercut is bit hard to read. The last reaction is kind of funny, but it also seems like you probably did not want to animate anymore. You should try to make something longer and complete it, even if it doesn't look the greatest.


I tried to finish the end but I just couldn't get the guy to get punched three times without wanting him to fall over lol.