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Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Potato Guy
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Oct 29, 2007 5:15 PM #65655
Nice one AD.

Anymoar C 'n C's or rankages on my animation???

Here it is btw, http://antiup.net/files/kICK.swf
CriticalDesign
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Oct 29, 2007 8:27 PM #65691
Hm, the person should bounce when they hit the wall, and the kicker should kick slower.

As well, the drawings could be smoother.

And when the foot hits the person is about when they should start reacting to it. They should fly back instantly after that.

And try working on a different kick style, since a kick like that would generally be weak.

Unless it is sparta o_O

But I like it :)
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Oct 29, 2007 8:54 PM #65696

thats a run I made. Its fbf no loop


this is a weird kick and it has some particles in it. I tried lol
C une C on both please.
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Oct 30, 2007 12:56 AM #65734
Run sucks; more in-between frames and easing. The particles were actually very good at a beginner level. Just work on the stickman's animation itself; don't move into effects and particles until you're better at basic animation.

Good job.
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Oct 30, 2007 5:25 AM #65777
meh, explosion:
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=1944

attempt at a different style of explosion.
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Oct 30, 2007 5:33 AM #65778
Looks pretty pro to me lol.
I have seen it in T.V once but slower and crappier.
Nice job...needs color.
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Oct 30, 2007 10:07 AM #65780
Hi!
Here is my little animaton:

swfup.com/file/44397
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Oct 30, 2007 7:02 PM #65794
www.teamglue.net/BF.swf
My animation
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Nice explosion raid force...
raidforce
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Oct 31, 2007 4:26 AM #65864
running:

http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=2003
Tawnik
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Oct 31, 2007 2:07 PM #65867
GTFO beginners section.

Pretty awesome.
Do more and make your own topic.
Jkyiij

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Oct 31, 2007 4:50 PM #65872
Weird running test :S
raidforce
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Nov 1, 2007 1:41 AM #65921
Quote from Tawnik
GTFO beginners section.

Pretty awesome.
Do more and make your own topic.


I only post what I think is crap here.
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Nov 1, 2007 1:52 AM #65924
Quote from raidforce


Really, get off here. That's decent enough to be posted in your own thread. While the running is a bit sloppy, there is a significant amount of easing applied throughout the strides.

Good job.
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Nov 1, 2007 4:11 AM #65928
My first.
http://antiup.net/view.php?id=1884
raidforce
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Nov 1, 2007 5:59 AM #65930
lol, bloodfruit, GTFO with your so called first. :P
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