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Jan 16, 2010 1:56 AM #537085
Ok I've missed A LOT lol here we go.
Nedwardturtl you need more easing and anticipation in the combo the walk cycle looks nice try one moving across the screen to make it less wobbly use onion skin ( Almost positive you already do but) Practice a lot.
FoShizzle they look pretty good for firsts make the run not stop in the transition and slow it down. The second one's a lot better.
Joshua (whatever) It looks nice make it smoother and like Nedwardturtl you need a little more easing and anticipation. Practice a lot also act like you just started flash making lots of tests and all.
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Jan 16, 2010 2:49 AM #537107
ok i know this animation stinks and I resized at the end but here it is:
http://www.truploader.com/view/545098 (finally I can post sites!) btw i feel.....sad because i see these other beginners......they're animations a unbelievable
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Jan 16, 2010 7:05 AM #537209
Use more frames so he actually looks like hes running don't lean so far forward swing the arms arm back running looks ungraceful and check some tutorials, and don't worry they have just practiced more.



EDiT
I feel like all the best people on this site left for a while lol, we had foshizzle in here and doc and all these other people who aren't totally flaming the crap out of everyone. It's nice lol
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Jan 17, 2010 4:43 PM #537720
http:// www. truploader .com/view/523608

Here you have the continuation of my last animation.

Thanks for coments =)

Mr.mcStick what did you mean with: "easing and anticipation" I don't really understand you
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Jan 17, 2010 4:53 PM #537722
http://www.truploader.com/view/523608
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Ok, What I mean is when you punch you don't just jab straight out if you want power you have your arm back a little to have more force and you lean into it a little. Easing is basically the whole animating balls going back and forth idea. Basically your slowing down and speeding up in the correct spots. I'll post a tutorial link in a second.
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Jan 17, 2010 7:24 PM #537764
I think im getting the hang of walking tell me how i can improve please.
Armature-http://www.truploader.com/view/320316

Frame By Frame-http://www.truploader.com/view/038066
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Jan 18, 2010 12:26 AM #537886
MY FIRST FLASH EVER
http://filebox.me/view/g0fw2here
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Jan 18, 2010 12:40 AM #537893
Ok... Stik Pimp it looks more like a run walk in front of a mirror and see yourself taking a step it's completely different from running.

Vendetta, It's ok massive resizing and the particles need practice. Whats up with the background and everything that happens?
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Jan 18, 2010 2:00 AM #537931
I don't know... lol. That's a few months old. Here is one of my newer W.I.P.'s. http://filebox.me/view/z7q3yp1dj
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Jan 18, 2010 3:32 AM #537993
Honestly it's pretty good finish it. And I would make the punch a little higher and less of a gap between the anticipation on the kick and actual contact point.
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Jan 18, 2010 3:54 AM #538007
Okay I'll work on that, thanks!
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Jan 18, 2010 3:55 AM #538008
No problem I've become a good CC(er) I guess lol
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Jan 18, 2010 4:11 AM #538020
Hey Vendetta did you take that beginning punch from a previous test you posted because it looks very similar

About the actual animation, the punch has good animation the arm that is not punching looks a tad off, not sure how to fix that, probably won't be too much of a problem and i would add another frame of easing to that kick, it's a bit to quick. If you fix that and add some nice reactions it'll be really good
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Jan 18, 2010 4:57 AM #538037
You really can't steal punch's. There's a large variety of styles and all but you cant actually steal it.
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Jan 18, 2010 5:45 AM #538051
I was asking if the punch was an edited copypasta from this

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=111539

Silly...
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