Hey guys, this is my first real fight animation, wanted to see what you guys think of it. Comments and criticisms appreciated.
http://adiman2370.deviantart.com/art...253A1386374174
P.S. The head roll at the end was SUPPOSED to be an epic neck-snapping...

This is just a simple 3 hit combo I made, any feed back is welcome.
http://www.filz.us/files/8aa12c4f/19c/3-hit_combo.swf

Hello,

I'm new in this forum, So i post my first animation :

Animation 1

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Hello,

I'm new in this forum, So i post my first animation :

Animation 1

Your animation is actually pretty good, but did the person grow in the last frame? Or did he stand up instead of crouching?

Quote from Blare

Hello,

I'm new in this forum, So i post my first animation :

Animation 1

His leftmost arm is kinda short and stays kinda still most of the time, kinda awkward... needs some easing, too. Hope this helps :)

Thank's for your com's.

I've make a new animation, Enjoy :

Animation 2

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Thank's for your com's.

I've make a new animation, Enjoy :

Animation 2

A few things:
-He slows down before and after the sliding, and then speeds up really quickly while sliding; what's up with that?
-What it should be is: (start him further back so he has some time to speed up), he runs, speeds up while running, ducks and slides while keeping the same horizontal momentum as at the end of the run, slows down slightly while sliding, and then either:
1)continues sliding even after the block, all the while slowing down, eventually coming to a stop, or
2)slides, then hits something immediately after the block that stops his momentum, and is then kind of lifted up to a stand, the stick using his forward leg as a sort of lever to transfer the horizontal momentum into vertical momentum and lift him up off the ground

Hope this helps :)

Or you could give him the room (bigger area) to slow himself to a stop, basically after the slide he can lift himself back up or roll forward onto his legs and slow down by walking.
I do hope I explained this correctly, and that I could be of some help.

Okay here's my second animation. Also how do I post flash files in here?

Woot! My first flash anim!
http://www.filz.us/files/46f3b877/1af/attempt_at_fight.swf

First flash animation ever in my everyday whole best and awesome life! XD
Just get exaggerated above!

http://www.filz.us/files/d914f703/1c5/Monster_Punch.swf

Man I Have Been On Hiatus For A While, But I Have Been Experimenting With An RHG Concept.
http://www.filz.us/25Fc
CnC Please!

Hello,

I made a little animation (very small) in which I tested a small effect, and in which I also test the loop system :)

http://filz.us/25WK

Thank's :).

P.S : Sorry for my bad english, i can speak french, arabic, but not really english :x.

Its actualy a really good anim, though you need to put a little easing at the beginning when he is about to roll and in the middle when he is about to roll back.

If you dont know, Easing = slow down and add more frames