Woohoo! I was finally able to afford flash and a tablet so heres my first flash anim
https://imageshack.us/i/exgdPrarg

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Woohoo! I was finally able to afford flash and a tablet so heres my first flash anim
https://imageshack.us/i/exgdPrarg

make it more quick. Also, fix the wobliness.
( pretty good for a beginner )

First flash animation in like ever (goddamit school, y u so mean).
I´d like to know how i can improve on this?
http://iamextremelypurple.deviantart.com/art/Small-flash-animation-for-testing-526443354

Quote from Flatliner

First flash animation in like ever (goddamit school, y u so mean).
I´d like to know how i can improve on this?
http://iamextremelypurple.deviantart.com/art/Small-flash-animation-for-testing-526443354

Well first i'll just say your flaws then suggestions.

Flaws:

1.) Too much wobbling..
2.) Work on the gravity
3.) Needs more easing
4.) Hits need spacing and force
5.) At first, the purple guy had one hand, then later on he had two...?
6.) I can see some resizing there..

Suggestions:

1.) Try making your hand steady to prevent wobblyness.. this may a lot need practice.
2.) Well, just remember how things work, how heavy they are..
3.) Try doing the things the sticks were doing in real life, check on how you're doing it, and learn from it.
4.) Spacing is just how large the space is from the previous frame to the frame where he punches or kicks. Force is just how hard does the reaction of the guy getting hit looks like (i hope i explained it well..)
5.) Complete the animation before submitting man
6.) Try activating the grid, Ctrl + ' (if you're using flash 8)

Hope this helped man! Keep animating and stay motivated!

Hey is everyone dead here now?

http://www.fastswf.com/1L7kkrk

Did something after a long time. I realized a few times wrong about it but can't put it in words. CnC help :D

Quote from Scar

Hey is everyone dead here now?

http://www.fastswf.com/1L7kkrk

Did something after a long time. I realized a few times wrong about it but can't put it in words. CnC help :D

1.) Resize of limbs.

2.) Tempo is too bland. Add a bit of change to it. Think of choreography as a musical piece. Sometimes there's a crescendo, sometimes there's a Diminuendo.

3.) Stop and Go motion.

4.) Overall, it's uncomfortable to watch with the camera view. Like, can you increase the canvas size? It's weird watching it when it's so small. I mean, I get it if it's a single scene but it drags on way too long.

Personal Note: Don't do repetitive things. Why not try to animate something new?

Short combo

http://www.fastswf.com/A5N6LzQ

Cnc would be helpful.

Quote from Horizon28

Short combo

http://www.fastswf.com/A5N6LzQ

Cnc would be helpful.

Damn I like it! Smooth. But it's kinda hard to give proper cnc when the stick is so small. Maybe try add a V-cam so we could see it from up close :)

Quote from JohnyBravo

Damn I like it! Smooth. But it's kinda hard to give proper cnc when the stick is so small. Maybe try add a V-cam so we could see it from up close :)

Thanks! You can see it closer now.

http://www.fastswf.com/TzRL0v8

When i first started animating, i animated for 3 days and then i quit doing it, and now i wanted to try doing something again, and it turned out as awful as i imagined.
http://filz.us/2wSY
Any suggestions on how to improve?

Quote from Angryhando

When i first started animating, i animated for 3 days and then i quit doing it, and now i wanted to try doing something again, and it turned out as awful as i imagined.
http://filz.us/2wSY
Any suggestions on how to improve?

Probably what someone else would suggest, but it's really, really helpful to go ahead and try learning and understanding the 12 principles of animation. As it turns out Alan Becker did a video series on this, and I found it really useful. It's short and has a lot of helpful visuals.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=haa7n3UGyDc

Quote from Angryhando

When i first started animating, i animated for 3 days and then i quit doing it, and now i wanted to try doing something again, and it turned out as awful as i imagined.
http://filz.us/2wSY
Any suggestions on how to improve?

All other parts were okay, but tthe throwing part..

it doesn't feels like his carrying or throwing that stick figure, but that stick figure looks like its floating. Also, it is weird when the stick figure did the split when he got throwned.

Fix it. ( but the animation is okay. )

My first flash that I took seriously, its kinda short.
https://youtu.be/SXdMcIA8mqc


I request suggestions.

hello hi I am waffles yes lets shake hands

anyway I'm new to flash and I'm trying my hand at it and making a bunch of small very short things so I can try and get a hand of the tools before I go on to anything more elaborate

here is one



thanks for time