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braindead

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Feb 14, 2007 7:33 PM #23212
ookay,that explained pretty much...what about CC?
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Feb 14, 2007 7:34 PM #23213
Umm dont Double frame very good for a second pwns my second and third
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Feb 15, 2007 3:48 AM #23336
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Umm dont Double frame very good for a second pwns my second and third



Agreed. That is dang good, now animate some more.
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Feb 15, 2007 4:13 AM #23351
Its kind of choppy,try to look at some tutorials on smoothness. Good job though.
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Feb 15, 2007 10:09 AM #23373
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Feb 15, 2007 10:13 AM #23374
Lol Red Ninja thats pretty good...

If only you could have an animated avatar
braindead

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Feb 15, 2007 1:34 PM #23384
maybe.
i thinked that i could make that into my avvy.
too bad im pretty sucky with flash :D
i need to work with it.
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Feb 15, 2007 2:02 PM #23386
Braindead your quite good at flash (better than me:) )yo just need to make longer animations.
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Feb 15, 2007 4:37 PM #23399
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Braindead your quite good at flash (better than me:) )yo just need to make longer animations.



err...
im pretty bad with it.
and in that i needed only pencil and brush tool.(+ paint can thing!)
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Feb 15, 2007 5:52 PM #23404
yeah i kinda like ur, BD
but you double frame when the eyes are opening...
Fix that :D
braindead

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Feb 15, 2007 6:16 PM #23405
fixed!
http://www.swfupload.com/view/110835.htm

and now its in avatar size :p
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Feb 15, 2007 7:46 PM #23422
Here is my 2nd flash one. YAY
CLICK HERE
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Feb 17, 2007 2:35 AM #23565
i was told i was mid inter but whenever i post something there is allways something wrong so am i still a beginer??!!??!
http://media.putfile.com/air-combo-collab-2
http://media.putfile.com/fb-test
http://media.putfile.com/move-test-2
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Feb 17, 2007 2:46 AM #23566
Well your animations are fluid but they pack no punch. Pretty much the thing that gets you into intermediate is good physics and smoothness. Then the rest of the way up is graphics and use of imagination lol. Its smooth, physics are alright. The thing you need to work on the most at the moment was your blood for sure in that anim. It was ok, but it looked like med-beginner who just learned how to draw blood from a tutorial but still hasn't exactly grasped it.

I'm in no position to say if your inter but i'm just leaving some CC. Alot of people have told me i'm borderline inter but i think i still need to work out some of the basic movements a bit more before i'm there.

Oh ya and just 1 more point. Your entry for the air combo collab. When the stick tele's to the ground and punches the falling stick in the back, it just didn't look forcefull. It just kind of look liked he landed on the fist, instead of getting real a hard thrusting punch to the back.

Good luck to you.
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Feb 17, 2007 2:49 AM #23568
kk thnx man loving the advice :D
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