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Steyene

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May 20, 2007 6:50 AM #33338
@pivmaster, um there wasn't really that much animation, although the explosion was nice, the sound sucked though ... Keep at it and you will get it...
@ddmdragon, um you need to work on you movements... but keep practicing...
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May 20, 2007 10:09 AM #33350
tried too do a camera effect without v-cam went terribly wrong....

http://www.swfup.com/file/10570#feedback

ps. i can only post urls if i pot something and then edit it ?
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May 20, 2007 10:27 AM #33353
Right lol... um Sedition the blood was alright, although the way the stick was holding the gun was very bad, the back arm needs to be over the gun, you do that by drawing that arm on a new layer ABOVE the one with the gun on it, also the V-caming was two bad, perhaps a little fast, you can make it pan slower by adding more frames to the tween. Keep up the good work, oh and you also need to work on the recoil, as the stick with the gun didn't move at all when he shot.
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May 20, 2007 3:58 PM #33374
Here's a little flash movie I made. It's cheesy, but it helped me learn how to use onion skin more. And it's the first time I've animated with the paint brush tool, =P.

[SWF="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FrowntoLove.swf"]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FrowntoLove.swf[/SWF]
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May 20, 2007 4:23 PM #33380
Quote from demonicy
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Yeah, a little cheesy, as you said.
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May 20, 2007 5:20 PM #33386
I don't really think it is cheesy. The animation could of been smoother, but it was pretty good.

Keep practicing.
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May 20, 2007 5:39 PM #33387
here is a mouse trail I worked on for a while, (just dot's of radial gradient's).
http://www.swfup.com/file/10606
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May 21, 2007 1:53 AM #33446
Quote from Steiner
@pivmaster, um there wasn't really that much animation, although the explosion was nice, the sound sucked though ... Keep at it and you will get it...


Thnx for the advice and it was just a test for sound and the explosion thnx for the tips!
orange

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May 21, 2007 2:27 AM #33450
Hey, just made my first parkour animation. Tell me what you think, =).

[SWF="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FirstParkour.swf"]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FirstParkour.swf[/SWF]
*jynx*

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May 21, 2007 10:41 AM #33467
heres one. its not the best and its not finished :D

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-10657.swf
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May 21, 2007 10:51 AM #33469
Quote from *jynx*
heres one. its not the best and its not finished :D

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-10657.swf



Good animation!Keep going that way!
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May 21, 2007 11:55 AM #33476
thanks :D. i like making animations like that. with lots of killing and blood and yea
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May 21, 2007 1:08 PM #33480
It was kinda fast and please use different layers.

Orange, your animation could be better.
orange

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May 21, 2007 4:20 PM #33491
I tried to make his head smoother this time around =P. Tell me what's good and what's bad.

[SWF="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FreeAids.swf"]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/FreeAids.swf[/SWF]
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May 21, 2007 11:20 PM #33527
@Orange: If you want the head to look the same the whole way through, put the head in an entire different layer, just make it a basic circle, and move it to the right spot each frame. I personally don't do this, but a lot of others do.

Man, it's pretty cool to see all these new animators hopping into Flash isn't it?
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