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Alifighter
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May 27, 2007 2:27 PM #34097
would about meh.
painedadj91
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May 27, 2007 2:48 PM #34100
This is my very first animation ive been working on , C+C would be big time appreciated. Thanks.

[SWF="http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=previewwm6.swf"][/SWF]
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May 27, 2007 3:28 PM #34106
Quote from painedadj91
This is my very first animation ive been working on , C+C would be big time appreciated. Thanks.

[SWF="http://img169.imageshack.us/my.php?image=previewwm6.swf"][/SWF]


post the animation...
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May 27, 2007 3:59 PM #34111
swfup.come/file/11218

(Without the e)

I added the suicide bomber. :D
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May 27, 2007 4:27 PM #34118
holy - Did you copy that explosion? It was really good. Keep it up. :D

ali - It is really bad. I don't have a tablet either, but I pwn you so totally.

pain - Please post the animation.

slaughter - It was good for a first, much better than your first.
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May 27, 2007 4:40 PM #34120
Quote from Funky-Fred
holy - Did you copy that explosion? It was really good. Keep it up. :D

Thanks, but...
No, I didn't copy it. :)
Any suggestions on what to add next?
stickslaughter

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May 27, 2007 8:54 PM #34145
Hi this is my animation again buy i have added a bit more the falling of the man with the gun is crap i no but i need tips on how to make it smoother and to make my stick people not keap changing shape



http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa175/stickslaughter/Firstbrushanimation-1.swf


C&C please
Bongo

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May 28, 2007 3:55 PM #34214
Not bad Stickslaughter, work on the physics and speed up the FPS or add more frames.
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May 29, 2007 8:39 AM #34348
woohoo :D

not finished

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-11436.swf
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May 29, 2007 9:58 AM #34350
That nice *jynx* although the sounds were a little odd. But that was nice, the background could use some work, as could some of the movements but other then that it was nice.
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May 29, 2007 11:13 AM #34352
thanks :D ill update it and finish it
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May 29, 2007 2:04 PM #34354
Jynx, that was good. Nice use of bevel (If thats what it was) and quite smooth. Except you should work on the walking, make it look more comfortable.
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May 29, 2007 4:12 PM #34358
Ok heres my first ultimate noob animation , enjoy.

http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=thacliffultimate2cw1.swf
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May 29, 2007 4:30 PM #34359
Heres my first flash animation. Tell me what you think. :)



[SWF="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/poop2.swf"]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v193/Singic/poop2.swf[/SWF]
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May 29, 2007 4:36 PM #34361
I liked it , but didnt like what you was trying to do with the blood or watever in the last bit it look lame sorry the rest was good for a first try , better movement than mine :)