Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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TheZeroOne

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Jun 8, 2007 4:42 AM #36007
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nvm i got it and heres my lastest anime took me about 15 min. (lol im really slow!) Its my first shot at using this ink tool type animation and I really didn't try to make him look like he's jumping or doing anything... it was basically a test to see how this ink tool works :)~ here : http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12183.swf


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alright heres probably my fastest but also almost best one I think (not complete just wanted to post it beacuase idk lol!) http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12184.swf
sorry for not editng before and like tirple posting >.> well I updated this file a bit tell me wat you think (its kinda wierd I know but this is now my 5th animation!) http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12185.swf



Use the edit button... Don't triple post.

I didn't like the first one.

The second was okay, the sword was too slow.
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Jun 8, 2007 5:43 AM #36009
Please don't spam here by triple posting.

Thank you.
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Jun 8, 2007 6:39 AM #36011
yeah it was ok but the sword was slow
metares

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Jun 8, 2007 9:00 AM #36018
stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/obstacle-course.html

sorry, the forum doesn't allow me to have links until i have 20 posts.

just a guy trying to get through an obstacle course..

please comment...especially on his movement, looks VERY choppy to me.
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Jun 8, 2007 9:05 AM #36019
i liek the back ground but yeah he is kinda choppy. but thats pretty good for a starter :D
metares

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Jun 8, 2007 11:22 AM #36025
really? thanks, is the course 3-D enough? as in lighting and shadows...and will more frames help in makeing the guy less choppy?
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Jun 8, 2007 11:30 AM #36026
i like the whole background including hte drawing, shading but the stick-man is kinda wobbly and some times moves fast.
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Jun 8, 2007 11:52 AM #36028
Yeah.

Little choppy.

But kinda good.





Please post the image code instead.
skullfire

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Jun 8, 2007 7:03 PM #36066
Ya sorry about hte triple but my sword moved really slow becuase it was supposed to be slow mo (notice the heart beat stops when blood and everything goes fast again). ty
edit: Heres one I made (Not even close to finished though) just thought I'd post what I had so far (they are kind of warming up or showing off lol!) here:http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12234.swf this is my sixth animation sofar :)
edit: ok with the head on the blue guy and also i made some adjustments... :http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12236.swf there tell me what you think :)!
TheZeroOne

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Jun 9, 2007 2:08 AM #36150
It doesn't make sense, and it was choppy. Work on it more.
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Jun 9, 2007 11:31 AM #36198
here its for a competiton, the one colour one forgot the name

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-12270.swf

:( swfup makes my swf's larg
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Jun 9, 2007 11:34 AM #36199
yea you coied the direct link instead of the link for the page with the anim, its got a huge amount of size changing on the stick and the v-cam was shaking.
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Jun 9, 2007 11:38 AM #36200
You used black outlines, is that accepted?

Choppy.
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Jun 9, 2007 12:22 PM #36206
Edited cleaned up - http://www.swfup.com/file/12273
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Jun 9, 2007 2:56 PM #36261
It stops at he frame when he charges the beam. :D