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PaperGodzilla

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Jul 29, 2007 7:23 AM #48066
I don't know if it was just my comp or something, but the sound was late... Anyway, I liked most of the animation. However, imo, he should not stand straight again after getting stabbed (but stay hunched over in pain:heh:). Also imo, I think he should be pulled with the sword when it is pulled out (and his body should straighten out from the rapier being taken out).
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Jul 29, 2007 8:26 AM #48070
Hmm... I tried to do what you suggested, Godzilla. Please, ignore the floating torso/arm on the left, i was in mid-progress with the other stickman's body.

http://img63.imageshack.us/my.php?image=incompleteexperimentalrfs0.swf
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Jul 29, 2007 2:35 PM #48099
There seems to be less users here in the beginners thread for Flash users.
When I were here there were kinda many others here. :D
PaperGodzilla

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Jul 29, 2007 11:49 PM #48188
The arms are slightly misplaced it seems on a frame or two (for the victim). Also there is something wrong with the body getting pulled effect... but I can't quite place my finger on it... Keep it up.
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Jul 30, 2007 12:13 AM #48191
Do you mean on the first few frames, right when he gets hit? The arms seem a little weird to me then.
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Jul 30, 2007 2:12 AM #48218
Hi Yall i am the dragon hawk fear me
PaperGodzilla

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Jul 30, 2007 2:37 AM #48226
Quote from Panda Lord
Do you mean on the first few frames, right when he gets hit? The arms seem a little weird to me then.

Yeah, that's what I mean.

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Hi Yall i am the dragon hawk fear me

Why are you posting that here...? or anywhere for that matter...?


EDIT: Also, I just finished my new avatar so take a look <--------. However, I unfortunately had to scale it down from 100 x 100 (to about 67 x 67) and reduce the quality (128 colors/about 46 dpi) for it to be a small enough file to meet the requirements T_T. Anyway, tell me what you think.
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Jul 30, 2007 10:04 AM #48333
You know what I've decided to do? I'm going to get rid of the sheath in my anim, entirely. I recently realized that it will take extensive editing for the sheath part of the anim to work (this includes resizing the sword).

I have decided it will be MUCH easier to have the stickman return to an idle state after stabbing the other guy, with sword in hand.
Marshmallow

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Jul 31, 2007 9:57 AM #48602
My signature is one of my first flash animations, tell me what you think.
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Jul 31, 2007 4:40 PM #48656
So How long have u guys been macking flashes
PaperGodzilla

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Jul 31, 2007 9:50 PM #48762
I got flash some time in the middle of this month (July).
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Jul 31, 2007 10:53 PM #48797
View my powarz.

C&C or die. It's rushed and I was gonna make the wings flap but I hadn't the time. I got Flash around July, by the way. I don't quite remember.
PaperGodzilla

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Jul 31, 2007 11:02 PM #48801
I thought it was pretty good. The only things I did not like were: the hands, and the particles after the ball thing burst in the end.

Also, I think that he should have "joined" the two energy balls faster.
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Jul 31, 2007 11:27 PM #48803
Sometimes I screw up with the hands. But this time I went lazy (Since he was wearing gloves) and used rotation. As for the particles, I got lazy x10 as I wanted to end my misery already.

Thanks though.
PaperGodzilla

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Aug 1, 2007 2:49 AM #48827
Quote from Draco'X
But this time I went lazy (Since he was wearing gloves) and used rotation.


Oh, that explains it... I get lazy too (I think we all do).

Here's my newest animation. It's a short fight with a pretty crappy fire beam (with some crappy animation as well). C&C please.
Here it is.
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