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TheCreator
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Sep 20, 2009 6:59 AM #489608
What do you mean floated in mid air, do you mean the double jump? If so, did you happen to notice the smoke come from behind him?
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Sep 20, 2009 9:02 AM #489628
Speed it up. Also hes not rusty. Don't do double jumps they're un realistic as hell. Ect ect
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Sep 20, 2009 5:54 PM #489799
K ill add more frames next time,
I am rusty, havnt animated in like 4 months.
And as i said, its a scout double jump, its not supposed to look realistic.
Holy shit /ninja X2
And what teh hell? What kind of dipshit "Accidentaly" uploads the Kill The Spartan .swf?
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Sep 23, 2009 2:20 AM #490722
This is my first animation of ALL TIME on Flash

truploader.com/view/012737

I know it is not that good so comment back pls

P.S. This is friends account so don't rage it pls:Sweating:
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Sep 23, 2009 4:05 PM #490903
www.truploader.com/view/012737
It's choppy, the upper part of body moves faster than the legs so it looks weird.
It also lacks easing.
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Sep 23, 2009 5:51 PM #490925
How can I make it better pls reply
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Sep 23, 2009 8:52 PM #490983
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How can I make it better pls reply


Try to make him walk a little farther or just make it loop cause it just stops and his legs kinda go ahead of him for no reason
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Sep 23, 2009 9:58 PM #490993
Quote from RazrBlade
http://www.truploader.com/view/681002

My first flash. D:
c&c it's terrible, but aside from that?


Yours was actually pretty good. Nice start.
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Sep 24, 2009 4:30 PM #491453
Quote from xRAIDxPwNu
How can I make it better pls reply

wat do you wanna make bettah
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Sep 25, 2009 12:11 AM #491602
I want it to look like a walk, I might be self-critisizing but I think it is crap and want to know how to make it better

Here is a better one that I made after a friend told me to pivot my guys back leg :)

truploader.com/view/504900
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Sep 25, 2009 1:46 AM #491648
http://www.truploader.com/view/504900
Also, stop making titles, its nub.
And as we said before, choppy, uneased, bla bla bla.
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Sep 28, 2009 9:23 PM #493244
This might sound noobish, but what is c&cing
Vile.
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Sep 28, 2009 9:47 PM #493255
comment and critising, E.G C&C please, thanks.

http://filebox.me/view/0v6xfzk9y
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Sep 29, 2009 2:18 AM #493444
Haha
Was choppy at points, but otherwise seemed fine.
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Sep 29, 2009 5:48 AM #493496
It was double-framed awfully, that just didn't look good.
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