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Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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kaillera
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Sep 17, 2007 12:09 AM #58835
who me? oh.. well.. i never had to get over anything.. im just glad, mines r teh shit, compared to yours. not to be mean. and i did try to help you out with some things. So id take my advice if i weres u.
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Sep 17, 2007 12:40 AM #58840
To fill in the ground, put the ground into its own layer. Then, fill the ground with green, or whichever color you feel. You need only make a single keyframe for this. The rest can just be normal frames. If you don't know how to make a new layer, go to the left of your timeline, and you should see the name of the layer. Below that, there are four buttons. The leftmost button creates a new layer.
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Sep 17, 2007 2:35 AM #58848
Any comments on my first particle animation: http://www.swfup.com/file/27864
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Sep 17, 2007 2:54 AM #58852
Yeah. It's pretty good for a beginner animation, but you need anticipation and a sudden burst when the green thing comes out. More easing, too.
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Sep 17, 2007 4:44 AM #58872
wow eveyone here is good:Phew:
unique
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Sep 17, 2007 9:52 AM #58879
http://www.swfme.com/view/1188202

Another new animation.
kaillera
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Sep 17, 2007 11:06 AM #58882
do full bawdie =O it IS good tho
unique
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Sep 17, 2007 11:15 AM #58884
Rofl nah, i aint good enough yet.
But i did make another animation.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1178742

Edit: Lul, http://www.swfme.com/view/1207612
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Sep 17, 2007 1:53 PM #58890
Okayish. But the physics was off. The flips should go faster and stuff.
And you should make the victim move to, it's more fun to watch. And like this it seems you're lazy. Zoom in a bit, it looks better that way too.
Make more particles when he disappears, too.
I don't like the way the stick looks, but thats just me.

And now the good things :D
The running looks good, but way worse when you zoom in.


As I know (at least think) you're new I hope you'll think of all I told you next time you're animating and that it'll get better next time.

You've got some talent. Just keep doing animations and you'll get good in no time. I've been animating with flash for two months, and here I am, low inter (they tell me, atleast).

Do a Obstacle Corse to train movements.
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Sep 17, 2007 2:21 PM #58891
hey guys im kinda new to the flash scene ... i understand all the basics up to actionscript but... what do u think of this
"http://img503.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bagofkittensxr4.swf"
its my 1st ani... which is appropriatly named bag of kittens... im so using this all the time ^.^
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Sep 17, 2007 2:50 PM #58893
Ah thanks strills, I'll take that advice in mind.
I'll go start animating later, i have to go to bed.
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Sep 17, 2007 3:22 PM #58899
Quote from Panda Lord
Not everybody will receive criticism on their animations when they post them here. However, if you make your own thread about it, you'll be more likely to get criticism faster.

I think the animation is pretty good. The explosion looked a little weird, but it was well animated as well. I think your avatar deserves its own thread.


that wasnt an explosion.... it was the power he released in that jump what swirled the botton....

thanks for comment
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Sep 17, 2007 5:30 PM #58910
He should go way further(off the screen) with that power that it created


Heres my attemped on walking.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1061312

Yeh i know it's shit, don't rub it in.
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Sep 17, 2007 5:58 PM #58915
good efford, ezo, just make the whole body move. heres a usefull tutorial
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g129/jcamelo/Tutorialbyfrog.swf it teaches you how to do some of the basics of animating.

Quote from unique
http://www.swfme.com/view/1188202

Another new animation.


unique, i think you are good anough to move out of the begginers section, yet this is only my opinion so dont blame me for other peoples opinions such as "cR@p goe$$ b@ck T T43 B3gGiN3Rs S3cTi0NZ!!!!1111" but if you get anything close this response, there obviously a noob.
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Sep 17, 2007 6:14 PM #58917
I'd say stay here a little longer, but you'll get out of here in no time if you continue to improve.

Well I got out of here with my first flash :D

If you just work a few days your out of here.

Edit: Ezo, I smell Apples walking tut all over the place in your animation. :P
Nothing wrong with that, though.

It wasn't very good, but I aint good at walking either.
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