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thx...

new ^^ http://www.swfup.com/file/29741

and Monster don't double post...

ok it was my bad i thought the post i did was deleted but turns out it wasn't i delete it now

Hey everyone.
just made this. critique please. =D

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Hey everyone.
just made this. critique please. =D

i can tell u have potential. it was ok for a beginner. i didnt rly like how the sticks look tho, they look way to stiff. also try making the frame rate faster and add more force to the throw

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Aklema, lol, it doesn't matter how many collabs you're in. ^^

Physics was off, smoke was bad, it was choppy.

Then just say it.Instead of saying i'm a noob!!

Okay, here's my first pr0p4r animation....

Yeah I know it's as random as fu[SIZE="2"]ck[/SIZE].

[SIZE="3"]CLIKZ NOEWZ!!!!1111[/SIZE]

His head seems to be.. having an inner earthquake? It was pretty good altogether. Work on smoothness. Oh, and you don't have to redraw everyframe. Just make a key frame and erase the legs. Redraw them and move the body. *Phoof!* Instand smooth walk. (Make sure you move the arms too. Smoothness can also mean stiffness!!1)

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i can tell u have potential. it was ok for a beginner. i didnt rly like how the sticks look tho, they look way to stiff. also try making the frame rate faster and add more force to the throw

=)
Yeah, I have upped the framerate to 24 (from 18... could have sworn that it was 24 before....) I am also working on the throw.
I know that they look stiff... it's just my animation style.
I need some stickfight source code so I can see how other people do stick fight animations. I'm just breaking into the stickfight animations, so I'm just making up how to do everything as I go along.

I'm going to be adding to that anim. so ill probably post an updated and expanded one in a few days.

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His head seems to be.. having an inner earthquake? It was pretty good altogether. Work on smoothness. Oh, and you don't have to redraw everyframe. Just make a key frame and erase the legs. Redraw them and move the body. *Phoof!* Instand smooth walk. (Make sure you move the arms too. Smoothness can also mean stiffness!!1)

Could you grade possibly.....

Please.

for some reason i cant view the animation.

i cant see the animation

Well, okay, this is my second flash animation. Was kind of thinking of making it my sig, every time I make a flash animation like this I'm going to add it to my sig ^_^.

Well, here it is:
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=396

Speed it up. Add more seens at the end where it says Snipe, read some blood tuts. Read a gun drawing tut, and thats about it.

http://www.filecram.com/swf/672214.htm
It's only my seventh, so dont be harsh please lol.
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Here's my first FB evar. It's an attempted fullbod... fullhead. Enjoy!

View my swf file!