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Mar 14, 2012 7:45 PM #616232
[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/f23a6aec/b18/Moves_test.swf] width=600 height=300 [/swf]
I wanted to do a trail with this, but I can't find a tutorial anywhere.
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Mar 14, 2012 10:16 PM #616276
http://www.fileize.com/view/efef421e-036/
hey guys, im .. Relatively new to animating, i draw though, so i have some grasp on the concept. I know that i can get bettter however. Whudduyou guys think of this and anything i could make better?
(this is my current rhg btw)
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Mar 14, 2012 10:22 PM #616277
man you're awesome with particles
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Mar 14, 2012 10:28 PM #616279
Lol, thanks bro, :D i looked at a LOT of tutorials on it. They really helped :D
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Mar 14, 2012 10:30 PM #616280
CC on mine plz.

Made a new particles test, more or less based on Hyun's tut.
[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/62f61836/4a6/partycles.swf] width=600 height=300 [/swf]
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Mar 14, 2012 10:45 PM #616282
Ok, Dude,whatev's
Excellion1498
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Mar 14, 2012 10:51 PM #616285
...The hell.
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Mar 15, 2012 9:20 AM #616459
Drone, looks like you need your character to change his center of mass more, otherwise it doesn't really look like he's doing any movements, just waving his arms around and levitating. Particles were pretty cool though.

Excellion, it's somewhat hard to see what it's supposed to be (I haven't watched Hyun's tutorial), but I'd say it looks way too segmented. It first expands, then suddenly shifts into particles. You need to ease it a lot more, both in speed and in direction. Also, if you don't already animate each particle by itself, begin doing that.
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Mar 15, 2012 9:24 AM #616461
Lol, Alright, thanks, ill work on fixing that :P
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Mar 15, 2012 10:04 AM #616474
Excellion, You Should make way more particles, And not just the outlines.
You could use some different sizes for the particles. some drops a little bigger, some smaller.
Gravity makes stuff go down, ( the ones at the top ) when they have stopped moving up, make them come down before they dissapear.
And if it's water, ( what i am guessing it to be because it's blue ;P ), It starts breaking apart into particles after it starts falling down,.( Counts for other liquids as well ).
The particles move faster than the liquid, shouldn't be. ( unless you did that on purpose. )
Hope it helps!
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Mar 15, 2012 10:09 AM #616476
It was supposed to be more of an energy blast. I'm not very good with effects.

EDIT: Could I make my own thread? This thread is really inactive ;-;
[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/499b0794/548/partycles2.swf] length=600 height=300 [/swf]
Another effects test.

EDIT AGAIN: White Stick Test
[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/3e65de70/486/spin_kick.swf] length=600 height=300 [/swf]
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Mar 15, 2012 11:23 PM #616788
http://www.fileize.com/view/7d03ee8b-49a/
tried to make blood smoother even though im not one for blood
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Mar 16, 2012 4:56 PM #617096
Quote from Excellion1498
EDIT AGAIN: White Stick Test
[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/3e65de70/486/spin_kick.swf] length=600 height=300 [/swf]

Nice, but he looks a little stiff to me, maybe It's because his knees and elbows aren't defined enough. Nice angling though.
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Mar 17, 2012 12:05 AM #617302
Quote from pyrosamurai
http://www.fileize.com/view/7d03ee8b-49a/
tried to make blood smoother even though im not one for blood



why do about 80% of all you stickman animators Use the same Terkoiz - Stance? There're so many 100s of cool ones... it gets kinda annoying seeing the same thing from every animator. Anyway, My cnc...

The blood effects aren't the real issue here, you showed no anticipation on your moves, and it was kinda chopy. I say, you should focus on adding more frames, and working with anticipation. The background was nice, and I did see an attempt on Anticipation on the orange dude, but you just double framed it once, so it didnt work all that well. Keep ad it buddy :)!
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Mar 17, 2012 12:06 AM #617303
None for my FX? ;-;
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