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Nov 24, 2007 7:56 AM #69028
looks pretty good, but the head and back are stiff

my latest one:
http://www.swfup.com/file/63645
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Nov 24, 2007 8:01 AM #69031
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walk cycle... http://www.swfup.com/file/63556

@madhatter:don't double post.just edit the last post.


Well it kinda looks like he is having a small pelvis spasm as he walks.

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looks pretty good, but the head and back are stiff

my latest one:
http://www.swfup.com/file/63645


it is smooth for the most part just looks badly drawn.
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Nov 24, 2007 8:08 AM #69032
Naw, that sketchyness made it look good gyohdon.
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Nov 24, 2007 8:10 AM #69033
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Naw, that sketchyness made it look good gyohdon.


personally i think he needs to smooth it out.
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Nov 24, 2007 8:47 AM #69037
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Naw, that sketchyness made it look good gyohdon.


thanks XD
but it is pretty bad drawn, since i only use brush tool, dunno how to put symbols in the anim
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Nov 24, 2007 10:49 AM #69067
hey this is my 1st flash animation (really 1st) http://www.swfup.com/file/63721
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Nov 24, 2007 11:18 AM #69070
wow, that was random.
Keep trying, maybe add some more frames inbetween.
(by frames I mean keyframes)
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Nov 24, 2007 12:03 PM #69072
what does key frames do? (got flash today so i dunno what all the buttons do)
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Nov 24, 2007 12:21 PM #69073
You know the frames with dots in them? They are keyframes.

Just make more of them, and make the movement in each frame less so it looks smoother instead of the jerkiness of your animation.

Better than my first. >:O
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Nov 24, 2007 1:09 PM #69076
heres my 2nd animation http://www.swfup.com/file/63846
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Nov 24, 2007 3:17 PM #69079
ok what u should work on is the guys jump when he is first passing the block and when he gets over it he slides back for some reason....those are the only major things i noticed........the other to things are easing and physics
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Nov 24, 2007 5:27 PM #69097
cool thatnks


dont wanna 2x post so here there is my 3rd anim http://www.swfup.com/file/63988
(it will be strange why did that guy is getting up when he is standing,ill tel ya he is trying to fly away...)
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Nov 24, 2007 8:20 PM #69127
I'm back.. and suckier than ever.
http://www.swfup.com/file/64112

Just trying out things again.
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Nov 24, 2007 8:28 PM #69134
that tornado thing was looking pretty good Lars
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Nov 24, 2007 9:06 PM #69153
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I'm back.. and suckier than ever.
http://www.swfup.com/file/64112

Just trying out things again.


It was kai, but make fps bigger and work on movments.

My (as recuested):
View my Jumpin smoothy moving test!