Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Hellreaper

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Dec 2, 2007 9:29 AM #70205
hey, i know i'v been on stickpage for a bit but this is my first animation so
http://www.swfup.com/file/70286#view
comment please
Cai Johnson
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Dec 2, 2007 10:56 AM #70209
Work on easing and smoothness. Also physics were off.
Xelectroid
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Dec 2, 2007 11:09 AM #70210
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Rank. K?


Ranks are gay.

It wasn't even Med-Beginner, it was choppy, and wtf was he doing at the end?
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Dec 2, 2007 12:21 PM #70212
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Work on easing and smoothness. Also physics were off.


agreed.

the punches looked forceless... read tuts!
Hellreaper

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Dec 2, 2007 12:23 PM #70213
thnks for the comments guys, ii'll try to put more force on the punches next time. =)
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Dec 2, 2007 3:42 PM #70220
Quote from Hellreaper
hey, i know i'v been on stickpage for a bit but this is my first animation so
http://www.swfup.com/file/70286#view
comment please


It's not really bad or something, but the fact that you gave it sounds should mean that the most POWERFUL hits should have sounds too. I really missed them in the powerful hits. Also, you should make the screen shake a little bit when there's a powerful hit, and maybe use a bit blur.
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Dec 2, 2007 4:35 PM #70224
can a mod please help me post my anim?
Noobazorous

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Dec 2, 2007 4:45 PM #70228
sry for oduble post here is my anim.
sry for you having to download to see it, its not a virus i swear over my life. unzip it and watch it
sss
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Dec 2, 2007 4:47 PM #70229
Karthago you know what is strange in that kick animation? why the blood goes not on the kicking guy but on the blue? when you hit somebody blood goes not backwards...
Hellreaper

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Dec 2, 2007 5:35 PM #70234
Quote from slaught
It's not really bad or something, but the fact that you gave it sounds should mean that the most POWERFUL hits should have sounds too. I really missed them in the powerful hits. Also, you should make the screen shake a little bit when there's a powerful hit, and maybe use a bit blur.


thnks for the comment. i did put a sound on but it didn't go on swfup properly. thnks anyway i'll take that to mind.:Happy:
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Dec 2, 2007 5:48 PM #70236
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Karthago you know what is strange in that kick animation? why the blood goes not on the kicking guy but on the blue? when you hit somebody blood goes not backwards...


yeah i know but the blood was rushed how i did say

here is an old anim but i just vcamed:

http://www.swfup.com/file/70636

(i am still practicing with it)
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Dec 2, 2007 9:38 PM #70255
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can a mod please help me post my anim?

Well, you just SAVE your flash animation as a .FLA(it does automatically when you press SAVE AS). Then after you saved it, watch the movie with CTRL+ENTER, and the .SWF should appear underneath the .FLA. Now go to a hosting site for .SWFs, I strongly recommend http://www.antiup.net . Choose Upload File, and click the .SWF.
After uploading at antiup.net, you should click SHARE LINK, and then copy the URL while it's playing.

Kthxbai

Edit:
You should have this: http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=3902 . But then without my animation.:P



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Quote from Hellreaper
thnks for the comment. i did put a sound on but it didn't go on swfup properly. thnks anyway i'll take that to mind.:Happy:

Do you make your sounds STREAM? Because if you make them a EVENT, they play AFTER the last sound was done playing!
Explanation:
I suggest you make a new layer for the sounds, and F5 it all the way out. F5 is lengthing the frame. If you want to put a sound on the frame, press F7 on the frame you want it to be, and select the sound. If you did it right, it looks like this: Image. I put another frame into it to make it end, and put another sound on the frame(the one I created last)
Don't forget to make the sound STREAM, not an event. You can find it HERE: Image

i oosed hax to halp u guise
Cai Johnson
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Dec 3, 2007 1:46 PM #70323
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I was testing out blasts... C&C/Rank if higher than Med Begginer...

http://www.swfup.com/file/70060
A easin
g/kicking/reaction test. RANK IT IF IT IS HIGHER THEN MED BEGINNER


Well, it definitly isn't higher then
Med Begginer... Sorry...
Your legs are not always close to each other... I mean:
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Dec 3, 2007 2:12 PM #70325
Hey, Cia Johnson, I think your low inter. Or high Beginner.
Fedda

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Dec 3, 2007 2:27 PM #70326
My animated stick fight.

Sounds from CS.

sleekupload.com/uploads/gunshot_1.swf