Quote from Karthago

hm.. the phisics were off, the kick looked weird (kind of forceless)

...work on basics really... tits are very helpful, just read them and try to copy what they do.. after that you can better make your OWN things



well that wasnt bad.
i disliked the the second blurphase... its like to "Blury" all in all you know?^^
work on easing and smothening
EDIT: work on antiresizing too =)

lolz you mean tips, ok i totally agree with you and yea i still neeed to get used to flash, cause i use to be a pivoter soo... well you know, and uh whats antiresizing i really dont know anything about flash really.

Quote from ragingrasengan

lolz you mean tips, ok i totally agree with you and yea i still neeed to get used to flash, cause i use to be a pivoter soo... well you know, and uh whats antiresizing i really dont know anything about flash really.

no i mean tuts xD (tutorials)

anti = against
resizing = stick is small, then big, then small and so on

like that (antiresizing is selfinvented^^)

Quote from ragingrasengan

OK lets see where should i start ( i dont mean it in an arrogant selfish way ) well forst of all its stiff, and that kick wasnt powerful enough to send him that far, and is was choppy, and that leads to working on physics and easing, try using brush, i think sticks are too difficult. Enough CC ?

Now you do mine

nop not enought...but thanks i tried brush tool...you know what i suck at drawing...

Ok so can u plz CC on mine plz

I'm a newb at flash myself, so I won't do any crit. But I do know some things you need to work on. The button, and the fact that they have no head. =/

@Karthago- I love the avatar, i am a big fan of Sparta and the movie 300....great job, make it look more like he is running fast to kill someone, that looks as if he is taking a morning jog on a sunday morning with a spear and shield, like where he runs, maybe have the shield and spear move witht the arms like crossing, and faster speed, oh and it is really smooth...

@SSS- First of all, you need a stick that looks like a stick, stickpage here has a lot of tutorials, they will help you on getting the perfect stick, as for movements, explore newgrounds, they have excellant stuff, you need a lot of work, too much for me to criticize on

@Rasing Ragensan-The stick too is ugly, arms are too long and dont give him feet like that, and use onion skin if you don't,and make sure you draw each limb with eac part, not extending a limb past its joint.....anyway, work on basic movements like running and such

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i suck at blood... this is just a style i tried out

i like the style you have in your avatar, seems like it would be really good in some animations....but yeah, i didn't like that, sticks were ugly to me...try pencill?

i only put effort into the reaction, punch and a bit in the blood... the sticks were rushed

EDIT: yeah ive got some problems to limit myself in 1 stickstyle... in many of my anims i change the styles in one same anim ... thats weird i doubt its hard for me to get rid of that

yeah, well, iono, maybe try something like a guy getting smashed for blood, and the punch was alright, ....

yeah... i just tried 1 hour an animation in tentionstyle but i failed so hard, that i had to make something i like myself ^^

btw pleez notice: i nearly never animate.. im like a beginner in flash even if i have programs like it for years...

but i think i will do more now. maybe not sticks but art and other figures..

do you think im allowed to post some drawings i made in flash here? =)

(and i asked for your icq in your art thread would be great if you answered)

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i suck at blood... this is just a style i tried out

http://www.swfup.com/file/73447 Huzzah!

The legs freak me out a little. How do you draw your stick?

I draw them with brush.