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Nov 7, 2012 10:37 PM #781258
my Work :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puKnyXYwUu4
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Nov 8, 2012 7:00 PM #781913
hey guys, this is my first animation on this software: Flash!
Ok, now for the action: http://www.filz.us/62L
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Nov 8, 2012 8:31 PM #781957
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Yea here, The first preview to my new show "Bums Town" Yea I know it's crappy, but iI asure you it will be better the next time. MUCH better so here, if you think I should keep doing these then tell me. If not then well you know lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OI_MmCizxBI

I think simpler animations might be better for you right now. Studies and tests like The Bouncing Ball and things like that.
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I'm not sure if you were referring to me because of the show called bums town or some else xD if you were than yea I will be more active on irc lol.

I think Jdogg was talking to Hobozarus who posted just above you, lol.
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I just started using flash now instead if pivot and this is what i made :)
http://www.fileize.com/view/cc50f29d-c19/

All the movements seemed strange to me, sort of as if the stickfigure was made of rubber and was being moved by strings. Maybe that was on purpose though. You probably should focus on physics tests.
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My first animation watching Hyun's / FlyingPanda1990 / Yoyo tutorials and others here, on stickpage.

http://www.fileize.com/view/9e411730-29c/
Give me suggestions and tell me what you didn't like on my animation.
Also tell me what am I doing right ( to let me know if I should keep doing that way )

Also I think the particles at the end seemed to be a little restricted to one area. Try to fan them out more, maybe they should move faster too.
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Nov 9, 2012 1:25 AM #782200
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My first animation watching Hyun's / FlyingPanda1990 / Yoyo tutorials and others here, on stickpage.

http://www.fileize.com/view/9e411730-29c/
Give me suggestions and tell me what you didn't like on my animation.
Also tell me what am I doing right ( to let me know if I should keep doing that way )




this is really good just curious though are the shadows supposed to move before the sticks actually do? and also how did you make reflections like that they look nice
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Nov 10, 2012 11:59 PM #783854
Hoyyaaaaa!! :D wussup buddy XD I've been away from this place for some time now :), How you been bud?
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Nov 11, 2012 4:49 PM #784593


sorry this is my video not first or last i make alot of fight randomly but i dont know to make stick figures anyone help me??
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Nov 11, 2012 11:28 PM #784966
Really trying to work on these concepts:
Running
The amount of frames needed for smoothness
Punch movement

The sound and effects are just to liven things up, ya know, give it that special feel. So please feel free to give feedback.

http://www.fileize.com/view/ec64b693-efa/
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Nov 12, 2012 9:53 PM #785934
Here a random crap that i did in 1 hour and 50 mins, i was tired, so that's not my best. (i did "the fight" in 1 hour and 20-25 mins, than i added random stuff).
http://filz.us/6NK

CnC apprecied.
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Nov 12, 2012 11:00 PM #785965
Lol the stickman at the bottom answered for me :D not much to say. the yellow character's movements were believable.
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Nov 13, 2012 11:18 PM #786710
http://www.fileize.com/view/286a1c24-0bb/
Criticism please?
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Nov 14, 2012 1:46 AM #786794
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Hoyyaaaaa!! :D wussup buddy XD I've been away from this place for some time now :), How you been bud?

Hey Creative!! I'm great, how about you?
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sorry this is my video not first or last i make alot of fight randomly but i dont know to make stick figures anyone help me??

Pretty good. I think you should animate more basic things and work on stick-figure construction. You can make the floor stay the same by putting it on a different layer than the figures, refer to a tutorial to understand. Also try not to make any more random fights, they might upset some people.
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Really trying to work on these concepts:
Running
The amount of frames needed for smoothness
Punch movement

The sound and effects are just to liven things up, ya know, give it that special feel. So please feel free to give feedback.

http://www.fileize.com/view/ec64b693-efa/

That was okay. Though maybe you need to work on these concepts as well:
Gravity
Recoil
Follow-through
And basic things like that.
Although I imagine the animation was supposed to be a little bit unrealistic, the above concepts seem to be acknowledged by most as necessary to learn and understand.
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Nov 14, 2012 1:52 AM #786795
These Beginners aren't to bad.
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Nov 15, 2012 5:41 PM #788036
Well, first try of... well, I don't know what the fuck is this. It started as my first attempt with angles... http://www.fileize.com/view/6f794b43-28d/

So, any good tut for angles? I really don't know how to start with it...

EDIT: Also, the file is just my avatar ;)
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Nov 15, 2012 6:11 PM #788046
Not too much to say, that's very nice for a first try, it seems that you already know how to ease and flow. :o
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Nov 15, 2012 6:33 PM #788060
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Not too much to say, that's very nice for a first try, it seems that you already know how to ease and flow. :o


Yes. This is first try with something else than just 2-D stick fight... So yeah, I know a bit (but I'm not good at it, I still don't know how to apply "power" to the attacks, they all seem weak).
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