My 5th anim in flash
http://www.fileize.com/files/ed1e1910/9de/ewan.swf
CnC anyone????
Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Apr 30, 2013 3:02 PM #960699
Apr 30, 2013 11:18 PM #961002
I've got my first flash animation! :D Here's the link to Deviant Art. http://binary10101error.deviantart.com/art/Basic-Punch-368908976?ga_submit_new=10%253A1367363684
May 1, 2013 5:24 PM #961859
So this is my first animation :)
I stopped for some reason D:
http://www.fileize.com/view/ac9aeccb-f42/
The running at the end looked off while I was doing it but doesn't look so bad now :)
Constructive criticism please and thank you <3 It's unfinished, in case you didn't notice
I stopped for some reason D:
http://www.fileize.com/view/ac9aeccb-f42/
The running at the end looked off while I was doing it but doesn't look so bad now :)
Constructive criticism please and thank you <3 It's unfinished, in case you didn't notice
May 2, 2013 2:19 PM #962773
May 4, 2013 12:58 PM #964659
http://www.fileize.com/files/7bd5e093/779/Demo.swf
CnC please. I wanna get better.
CnC please. I wanna get better.
May 4, 2013 1:26 PM #964681
Ok time for Critiques
well when the stick run its head skew or bended so try to replace it another head then fix it while the run needs faster movements,when he moves its foot it must move a bit.
Do not use a blur like that,try to change the blur's axis to X only,press the lock button at the movieclip then remove to Y axis,do not shake the cam frequently try to shake it when a attack hitted an enemy/Objects,also not bad and i saw hyun's tutorial there >.>
Umm its nice but try to make the first punch's arm slowly return and anticipate the second move,also at the uppercut he should jump a bit then fall then anticipate the last punch's arm.
By The Way nice animations mens :D
Quote from EliteFwizSo this is my first animation :)
I stopped for some reason D:
http://www.fileize.com/view/ac9aeccb-f42/
The running at the end looked off while I was doing it but doesn't look so bad now :)
Constructive criticism please and thank you <3 It's unfinished, in case you didn't notice
well when the stick run its head skew or bended so try to replace it another head then fix it while the run needs faster movements,when he moves its foot it must move a bit.
Quote from martinime
Do not use a blur like that,try to change the blur's axis to X only,press the lock button at the movieclip then remove to Y axis,do not shake the cam frequently try to shake it when a attack hitted an enemy/Objects,also not bad and i saw hyun's tutorial there >.>
Quote from Safhttp://www.fileize.com/files/7bd5e093/779/Demo.swf
CnC please. I wanna get better.
Umm its nice but try to make the first punch's arm slowly return and anticipate the second move,also at the uppercut he should jump a bit then fall then anticipate the last punch's arm.
By The Way nice animations mens :D
May 4, 2013 10:16 PM #965005
Quote from J.Christian
Umm its nice but try to make the first punch's arm slowly return and anticipate the second move,also at the uppercut he should jump a bit then fall then anticipate the last punch's arm.
By The Way nice animations mens :D
What does anticipate mean?
May 4, 2013 10:41 PM #965021
Quote from SafWhat does anticipate mean?
Anticipation is the character basically charging up for a movement, aka pulling away his bodyparts from the movement, and then doing it.
Go look up some tutorials on it, I'm sure they'll be helpful. Personally I have no tutorials I can recommend, but you'll probably find some ;3
May 6, 2013 3:29 AM #966286
My first true animation..... practiced for awhile before posting
link: http://www.fileize.com/view/c4319d2c-fb5/
link: http://www.fileize.com/view/c4319d2c-fb5/
May 7, 2013 1:11 PM #967507
Just wanna show my very first finished animation here --> http://greenmustika321.deviantart.com/art/First-Stick-Figure-Animation-370214295
Cnc will be appreciated.
Cnc will be appreciated.
May 10, 2013 8:05 PM #970417
May 10, 2013 8:08 PM #970425
Quote from ErrorBlender
I'd recommend not using Free Transform as much as you do; the movements feel fake that way and not properly eased :P
Your effects are pretty nice though :3
May 11, 2013 3:21 AM #970770
Quote from ErrorBlender
Nice anims. The 2nd practice anim was really good. I liked the first one a lot too. Just try to make your characters a little less shakey.
May 11, 2013 3:23 PM #971267
May 11, 2013 3:36 PM #971274
Quote from ErrorBlender
lots of improvement since your last :) this is just a style preference but try to make the arms bend a little more when he runs. Also, during the jump his arms should be stationary behind him, unless you were trying to make it look like he was trying to fly. if that was the case good job. Your gravity also needs a little work, make sure that as he reaches the apex of his jumping arc, he slows down, and he speeds up as he falls. Make sure he accelerates or it gives the illusion of floating back to the ground. Keep practicing. You're going nowhere but up man.